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Jun 12, 2008 10:04

Title: Sentimental Dolly Romance
Chapter: 5/6
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Humor
Pairing: AijixMaya
Summary: When Aiji gets a RealDoll as a gift, he doesn't think of it as much more than a silly joke, and he doesn't imagine he'd ever have a use for it. But things change...

Disclaimer: This story is a work of fiction and is in no way associated with the ( Read more... )

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aiienzo June 12 2008, 04:35:27 UTC
I think this was my favourite chapter yet, despite the disappointment of Maya's confusing words :(

I'm sorry I can't comment more right now, but I'm rather distressed. I'll definately come back to it again and give you a better review.

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kiri_ka June 12 2008, 04:46:23 UTC
Aw, thanks seme-chan :)

Don't worry about it if you're distressed. Just think happy thoughts~ Like CARNAGE!

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aiienzo June 12 2008, 18:30:15 UTC
Okay. I'm feeling better :]

I really enjoyed Aiji's characterization throughout this story. It's logical, and just like a confused suddenly queer-ish boy's personality should be, lol.

I can't wait to read the last chapter :D

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kiri_ka June 12 2008, 18:39:55 UTC
I must say "confused suddenly queer-ish boy" made me snort with laughter XD And I'm sooo happy I got the characterization right~ I had a different plan for the ending before I wrote this, and it was much much worse in terms of characterization.

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cadkitten June 12 2008, 18:35:47 UTC
kiri_ka June 12 2008, 18:46:01 UTC
It would work better if you brainwashed him, perhaps. Wouldn't take much work :P

Don't be sad! I haven't got it quite planned out yet, but I'll make the last chapter really good, I promise~

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cadkitten June 12 2008, 19:19:54 UTC
kiri_ka June 12 2008, 19:35:19 UTC
Well... really really good at least XD I don't want to promise 4x really good and then disappoint you!

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aphrodisiaclove June 13 2008, 02:12:17 UTC
YAY! Update <3 This was quite the lovely chapter. Aiji totally wants Maya. Tsk tsk at Aiji for using Kimi as a replacement...He should've used the doll instead. (;

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kiri_ka June 13 2008, 02:59:41 UTC
Thank you! ♥ But I think, even with the doll and Kimi, it wouldn't add up to Maya 8D

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Just wanted to say anonymous August 3 2008, 06:37:20 UTC
Brilliant!

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Re: Just wanted to say kiri_ka August 3 2008, 18:44:14 UTC
Thank you ♥

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thanks much anonymous September 23 2008, 18:28:42 UTC
omg.. good work, guy

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Re: thanks much kiri_ka September 23 2008, 18:45:23 UTC
thanks~ :)

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