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Fic for withthepilot

Jan 31, 2012 21:49

Title: Carving Up the Wall
Fandom: Star Trek XI / Hawaii 5-O AU
Pairing: Kirk/Sulu
Rating: NC-17
Betas: Many, many thanks to leftarrow.

Notes: Written for withthepilot for the kirk_sulu exchange.

Declaimer: I do not own these characters and court no profits with this fanwork.

( Whatever it is they bring out in each other, Sulu wouldn’t call it nice or well adjusted. He and Kirk aren’t the dinner-and-movies types and never could be. Living in the silence where their secrets overlap and in the sound of squealing tires and the way Kirk says “Book’em, Sulu” like it’s both the best joke in the world and the only compliment he believes in. )

Comments 3

sail_aweigh February 1 2012, 18:33:58 UTC

OMGOMGOMG, this is amazeballs! I love seeing these guys as Five-Oh. And the way loss has finally broken down their defenses so they say something real. ♥

withthepilot February 2 2012, 23:50:43 UTC

AHHHHHH. I haven't had a chance to read this until just now and. Seriously? AHHHHHHHHHHHH.

This is so perfect! I love how seamlessly you integrated the canon with the H50 universe. And the little nods to their pasts-Sulu's knife, Kirk's scar-are fantastic, and hint at a thousand compelling stories that could be told. It's amazing how much you're doing with just a short scene, what an expansive and dangerous world you've built. And then the sex, omg. So hot and so raw.

I was secretly hoping this was the prompt that would be filled, so you've really made my day. Week, month, etc. Thank you so much!!!

secretsolitaire February 3 2012, 00:39:33 UTC

Ooh, this is fantastic! So rough and desperate and hot.