Maybe you can write it off?

Dec 10, 2006 18:32

So I'm in a funk (kinda) and it bugs the hell out of me. So I'm trying to write it off, quite literally. Continue to read this at your own risk.

Valued Traits )

drabble, atla, one-shot, fanfiction

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loveroftheflame December 10 2006, 19:42:39 UTC
I am in awe... I can't say any more. You are... brilliant.

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romanitas December 11 2006, 15:32:23 UTC
Loved them. Awesome, is what they're full of.

Your Azula POV in the first one was perfect.
But a question--is the last line open to interpretation? Because I'm not sure if it's Katara (my first guess) or Ursa (came into my mind two seconds later).

Hate Ozai with a burning passion, but adored "Soot". Maybe because of the Ursa bits, and I heart Ursa. ♥
Amazing work. :D

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kirschreich December 11 2006, 15:55:01 UTC
It's Iroh.

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romanitas December 11 2006, 23:18:14 UTC
[re-reads]
AH! Okay. For some reason I thought you had written a "she" or "her" or something similar into the sentence. ^^;
Makes so much more sense now xD

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smillaraaq December 13 2006, 00:36:15 UTC
Poor, poor Iroh. *sigh*

(And how I envy your ability to do such perfect little drabbles!)

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flyawayohglory December 15 2006, 04:40:01 UTC
oooh, the violence of both Azula and Ozai! Both drabbles were so chilling. Sorry you're in a funk, but look what you make out of it. I like!

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beyondthemoor December 31 2006, 04:57:51 UTC
These are powerful & incredible. I really admire your writing!

Thank you for sharing. ^_^

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