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kirschreich

Letters (Chapter 3)

May 31, 2007 16:15

( Chapter 3 )

avatar: letters (post-war), atla, wip, fanfiction, avatar: katara & zuko

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loveroftheflame June 19 2007, 14:38:41 UTC

Oh Iroh... *snicker* That was just too delish. He is a bit heavy handed in his tips huh? Gotta love it.

But WOW, Yugoda! So cold... I really love where you are going with all of this... and poor Iroh being offered infant brides.. unreal.

So glad you reminded me of this one! Great read! And yeah, the soap is picking up... Haru is getting worse.

For lack of a better word, Squee! wise_one_in_hel June 19 2007, 15:50:43 UTC

I loved everything. This story is so wonderful. Each character's 'voice' is very individual and clear. The Weng's are some of my favorite OC's ever. "Two of your lovers (Feng and Yohji) have taken interest in your sister, Ouka. She would like to know whether you would mind greatly if she took them off your hands." That bit KILLED me. Also adored everything with Iroh.
I only wish you'd update this a bit more often, but pot kettle black and all.