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kirstenxashley

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Dec 21, 2009 16:31

Title Bullets
Prompt Evidence
Characters Leah Clearwater, Sam Uley
Rating PG
Summary Leah Clearwater can't sleep.
Word Count 500

( Bullets )

500 words, twilight, fic, leah, sam, sam/leah, glass

Comments 5

beautyfrompain December 21 2009, 23:37:23 UTC

lol. I see your evil plan now, you are trying to kill me. KILL MEEEEE! *dies*

Seriously, this was beautiful and heart breaking. I love all the visuals in the first paragraph, absolutely wonderful way to describe it. Sam/Leah just tortures me in a really good way, haha.

mhgood December 21 2009, 23:57:06 UTC

Wow. Heartbreaking and angsty. I love it! Very lovely descriptive writing, too.

akkas_journal December 22 2009, 00:30:58 UTC

OMG. I loved this, bb. So very angsty and Leah. :D

flowrs4ophelia December 22 2009, 00:38:36 UTC

“Leah?” he says, but his tone is unfamiliar. He might as well have said, “tree.”
OUCH. Poor Leah. :'(

This is very well done. :)

starcross256 December 22 2009, 07:59:46 UTC

This was ah-mazing. :) Keep drowning us in good fan fiction! ^^