Sunwashed insight

[kirzen]

The soft cries of gulls washed quietly across the room, drawn down into the sea breeze softened woven rug on the doorstep where Bobbins, the marmalade tabby who had adopted the Berkin's porch sat quietly sunning himself on the warm stones. The bell, afixed by careful hands at the apex of the door sat delicately silent but alert, its edge gleaming

Comments

[the_vulture]

Lovely!

[crocuta]

I think it is wonderful! I know I've not replied to the last few you posted but that is because I think that any short reply isn't worthy..that each entry needs a properly thought out and studied reply. You put so much into your writing I just feel that the replies I would give are not of a proper caliber :P
But please..keep it up! I want to read more, it truly is a treat!