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Gift fic for miquilis!

Jun 16, 2013 00:23

Gift fic for miquilis!

Title: Don’t Promise Me the Moon
Pairings/Members: Fujigaya/Yokoo
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: none
Summary: The only thing standing in the way of the two of them being happy together is the fact that Fujigaya likes girls and Yokoo never bottoms.
Notes: Written for miquilis who wanted relationship fic where things are complicated. I hope you ( Read more... )

pair: y/f, rating: nc-17

Comments 4

mbdancer8o8 June 15 2013, 17:05:40 UTC

These 2 are so hot together~
LOL at Fujigaya watching all the WRONG porn and Senga showing him the RIGHT porn! XD I half expected Senga to show him homemade porn. LOL.
Yokoo getting advice from Tamamori!
And why their making of videos are so short!!! LOL. ♥

miquilis June 23 2013, 22:25:38 UTC

Sorry for the late comment, I'm not used to my fic being posted on the first day of an exchange that I didn't even notice until someone told me and then had an unfortunately busy week at work. Thanks for writing for me anon-san, I hope it wasn't too bad having me as an assignment.

I was surprised I got yokofuji but I do like how close their bond is even before they take it to anything more, almost as if they are already in a relationship before they decide to be in one. For a pwp about them struggling with who bottoms and being in a new dynamic I liked those small scenes you included of them realizing that they both had to give and change a little to make things work - It was clear Fujigaya presumed being in a relationship would be an easy natural extension of their friendship and Yokoo almost sadly already assumed they were going to fail. The clash of their two differing assumptions was interesting but Senga and porn was there to solve the problem instead.

Thank you again for writing for me.

xanithofdragons June 24 2013, 05:30:42 UTC

Oh, Kisumai's dysfunctional couples. ♥♥♥ And kouhai giving relationship advice/teaching about the good porn.

I really really really do hope they get to do hotel footage someday, though.

The make-up sex was so hot. I really loved the slow, gentle pacing of it. ^_^

noella84 June 24 2013, 11:48:05 UTC

Those two are hot even when they're are supposed not to function. ♥

Lol at Senga knowing all about the good porn.