Gift fic for noella84!

Jun 23, 2013 23:40

Gift fic for noella84!

Title: Awakening
Pairings/Characters: mostly Yokoo, also some Fujigaya and Kitayama
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: futuristic AU (based on the concepts of the movie Equilibrium, but you don't have to have seen it to get the idea, I think)
Summary: In a society that has outlawed feeling, Yokoo has feelings for Fujigaya. This makes things ( Read more... )

rating: pg-13, pair: y/f

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noella84 June 23 2013, 22:00:33 UTC
I didn't watch the movie, I didn't know this poem, but what can I say... I really loved this fic ;___; a lot ;___; Thank you very much for writing it for me.

I love dystopian and sci-fi universes, so you really made me happy with this and there is plot actually!!!

It's also very well written. I really liked how it focuses on Yokoo starting to feel emotions and how he's almost overwhelmed by the new feelings and by the mysterious Fujigaya. It was all very sweet, almost as if Yokoo were a kid having butterflies in his stomach for the first time, and not only that, but all the emotion he felt, the confusion, but also the hope and the desire to feel more, to know more... <3

I think I screamed when Kitayama said Fujigaya was feeling the same way. XD

Also Kitayama grabbing the food Yokoo brought, A+ X°D

And Nikaido is a mess in every universe <3 XD

Thank you thank you thank you <3333333

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imifumei June 30 2013, 05:51:31 UTC
I'm really glad you liked it. I thought the universe really deserved a more involved plot, so that's why it doesn't seem plotty to me. But I love this kind of world, so I was really excited to write for someone who was interested in reading it.

Thanks for your nice comment!

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yararanger June 24 2013, 06:31:20 UTC
This is an amazing fic and I'm currently standing at a train station crying over the last line so I can't leave a proper/coherent comment but I WILL as soon as I can because ahhhhh ;____;

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imifumei June 30 2013, 05:52:21 UTC
I am one sadistic bastard because when I find out that something I wrote made someone cry, I feel like "YES! SUCCESS!"

I am glad you liked it. :D

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