Gift Fic for tottchupi

Mar 09, 2011 16:19

Gift Fic for tottchupi
From imifumei

Title: Eight Miles High
Pairings/Groups: Gen
Rating: PG for language and serious themes
Warnings: This is not fluff.
Summary: Kisumai receives tragic news of Kitayama and Tamamori's plane going down.
Notes: This explores feelings of grief and loss. It is told from Fujigaya's perspective, in first person. I think I went ( Read more... )

rating: pg, pair: none

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beltenebra March 12 2011, 13:32:28 UTC
This was so beautiful and raw and so hard to read but absolutely worth it. I loved that you chose to tell the story in first person, the range and depth of emotion you have captured is incredible.

All of their reactions were perfect and awful but Miyata just hit me so hard. The utter hopelessness that stole the vitality from him was so well described. I.. just... ♥

Really excellent job, author-san.

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imifumei March 18 2011, 00:11:34 UTC
Thank you so much. I guess I should say I am sorry Miyata's reaction was so hard to read but. . . actually I am not sorry. I am really glad that it made sense that I wrote him that way and that it was effective enough to get that reaction from you.

Thanks! ♥

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yeska_noka March 13 2011, 07:15:09 UTC
It took me a few days before I was willing to even click on this.

Well-written and utterly horrifying, but thank you for having a... relieving ending? Man, talk about emotional roller coaster. D:

Will probably read again at some point, because wow. But also OUCH. D:

Nice work.

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imifumei March 18 2011, 00:15:04 UTC
Thank you for being willing to click in the first place. ^^

Your comment made me feel really proud for managing to achieve what I wanted to achieve with this. Thank you so much. ^^

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risakochan March 29 2011, 16:06:33 UTC
i'm not usually an angst fic nor a first-person POV kind of person, but this somehow really touched me.. taipi's raw emotions and pain hurt me just as much. not the best thing to read over lunch at the restaurant cos i cried into my soup omg. -__- this was really good though!

thank you!

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imifumei March 29 2011, 16:09:21 UTC
Oh, I'm glad you gave it a try, even if it didn't seem it would be to your liking! I'm so glad you found it touching.

Sorry to make you cry in public, but it makes me feel good to know my work was so moving. You're very welcome.

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