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Gathered Round the Fire

Dec 15, 2010 22:22

Title: Gathered Round the Fire
Author: Kisa9
Rating: PG
Warnings: A liberal use of science terms.
( Summary: Prompt 79. Jim is homeless this holiday season and gets hurt. Len is the doctor who fixes him up and somehow is convinced to bring Jim home for the holidays. )

kirk/mccoy christmas

Comments 16

therumjournals December 18 2010, 01:36:47 UTC

i'll just be waiting for the follow up then ;-) you have a whole year to write it!

kisa9 December 23 2010, 23:01:12 UTC

Should I develop your skill for sexy writing, I will write a much better sequel to make up for this story. Thank you for replying, and have a very merry Christmas.

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kisa9 December 23 2010, 23:14:00 UTC

akuchan_47, you are much too kind. Perhaps I will surprise you with the second half of a much better written sequel. Thank you for posting your encouragement to this fledgling author, and have a great holiday season! =D

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kisa9 December 24 2010, 01:50:54 UTC

Sullacat,

Every one of your pieces delves deep into character development almost in direct proportions to my own failure of character development, for your characters loom large while mine hang as side ornaments. I beg you lend me some of that creative talent for finishing the next portion of this story. Certainly, my favorite story of yours, 'Like a Bad Rash', fused the beginnings and endings together so beautifully, it left me with a huge smile for days. I do not fancy myself a miracle of creating an ending such as yours, but am glad that you found entertainment in my brief contribution to fiction.

Thank you and great wishes this holiday season! =D

weepingnaiad January 3 2011, 10:02:20 UTC

Lovely AU, while still capturing the heart of them.

kisa9 February 26 2011, 00:54:38 UTC

Apologies for a shamefully late response. My attempts of repressing this story's existence caused your comment's lonely standing in the response box.
Occasionally, a better story plot begins to wave its hand, and I feel like starting this entire piece of fiction from scratch.
Scientific theories are the only things I managed to capture...and perhaps the true nature of conversations between two intelligent individuals. Something that lindmere accomplished much better than I.

Weepingnaid, your own stories are so exciting to read! Fiery and rushing, they hold such passion and intrigue. Brain willing, I'll one day attempt another story, and hope to capture some of that intoxication your stories that make my own blood run faster. = D

Thank you!