Shackles

[kiskafalair]

Even as a child, I knew this was wrong.

Over and over in my mind, repeatedly, I’d chant this is wrong, this is wrong, this is wrong… but, it never stopped me. And of course, it never stopped her.

Bellatrix, Bella, Bell. Warrior, Beautiful, Musical. A chime that signified the beginning and a toll that ensured the end.

Comments

[la_dissonance]

dgjrgoiuerlsdk gaaaaaah that was so awesome! there are so many awesome things going on here that I honestly don't know where to start... *refrains from jamming on keyboard some more* I knew I would love this from the opening, which was one of those shiver-inducing ones. And the thing about Bella's name! Bellatrix, Bella, Bell. Warrior, Beautiful, Musical. A chime that signified the beginning and a toll that ensured the end. Guh. So fitting, and so beautifully put! I love how Andromeda was characterized, and it was fascinating to see how she saw Bella. And, despite the fact that I generally get squicked by noncon, this was blazingly, meltingly hot, and one of the better femslash sex scenes I've read in a while. Guh again!

You have some seriously fantastic things going on here, and I find it hard to believe that this is really your first fic. (Really? Really? Because I don't think I've ever read a first fic that was this good - there were some language/etc. glitches going on, but what author doesn't have that? And practice

[kiskafalair]

Hey! Wow, you wrote a lot! Thanks for taking the time to review!

I knew I would love this from the opening, which was one of those shiver-inducing ones. Was it? XD; Oh my! I can't say I'm really good at writing happy fluffy 'wee!' stories, so I'm glad to know I'm getting closer at perfecting my art! =]

I generally hate noncon also. I have no clue what went through my mind when I wrote this. I think I was half asleep and getting high of of hot chocolate and nonsleep. I'm actually writing another Andy/Bella fic now that I have to do two versions of because this story accidentally turned my friend onto Blackcest rape and she wants me to create another version that's just as creepy as Shackles. Soooo, keep an eye out for that =P

[la_dissonance]

Huzzah for plot bunnies! *feeds them* And it's funny - my best stories are always born of hyper-insistent bunnies and nonsleep and stress-highs, too. Weird how that works!

I shall eagerly await the next story! Blackcest is one of my favorites, and not enough people write it. Not that I'm one to talk, because I've never written more than like, one Blackcest-y drabble, but STILL. It's nice to hear from someone new! :D

Oh, PS, have you ever considered, like getting these betad and posting them to a community? Because you totally should. *nods*

[kiskafalair]

Lol, I posted Shackles to hp_femslash a while back. =]

[kiskafalair]

Oh wow, thanks! I'll happily friend you back. <3