new poem, revised.

[kiss_of_nature]

I want to reach out and hold you.                                                                                    The only time that we spend in the same atmosphere                                                          floats by as i fall into your eyes. when i share your pain,                                                       is it so

Comments

[x_2nd2none_x]

awesome jill!...even better. I really like the added detail, especially about the eyes. That was very creative. How did you make "honey" and "appalachia" in color?

[kiss_of_nature]

when you go to post, at the bottom of the little box where you type your message, youll see a caption that asks of you want to do it in rich text. if you click on the rich text, itll enable you to change colors, fonts, etc. and thank you.

[jelf86]

its really good.. i like the revision better... keep on writing, ur awesome at it.. look forward to seeing some more soon.......

[kiss_of_nature]

aww, thanks sweet-thang
;o)