He Hit Me And It Felt Like A Kiss

Sep 18, 2008 00:58

She stood up abruptly from her chair, majestically and with earth-shattering intent, like a phoenix rising from the ashes, and looked me in the eyes, searching, as if trying to stare a hole right through me. It worked. Her stare cut me open like a laser-sharpened knife dicing an onion to pieces. She eventually began to speak and, although softly, ( Read more... )

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maarcalmndxfukr September 18 2008, 01:36:43 UTC
This is quite good :)

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kiss_strangers September 18 2008, 01:40:01 UTC
Thankyou! :)

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walpolian87 September 19 2008, 16:06:58 UTC
I'll be very disappointed if you don't write a detective story now. :P

Simon :)

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