colorful paperclips

Dec 15, 2005 22:00

the farm was fucking arctic tonight. there was only one hose on the entire farm that wasn't completely frozen solid so i had to improvize with intricate networkings of hose segments and buckets and melting ice with my hands. i also had to break ice in all the water buckets so the goats could hydrate. fricking goats. grow a brain and break your own ( Read more... )

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foxtr841 December 15 2005, 22:24:40 UTC
I really like your poem. It takes a lot for me to like a poem- but this imagery and parallelism is just gorgeous. And the rhyme is slight, but there. I like the rhyme of sun/affection. Never really heard of that before.

What surprises me the most about our class writing poetry is just how goddamned good EVERYONE is. It's amazing. You're no exception- I love it.

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kisscooney December 15 2005, 22:39:23 UTC
tankyoo. you're pretty.

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birdiekatesings December 16 2005, 01:11:58 UTC
I like your diatribe about the goats. I laughed.

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that_nick_kid December 17 2005, 07:02:44 UTC
cooney you too coo fo schoo! and i'm totally bummed i missed out on pantsgiving
i wonder what the guys at my construction job would think of me if i suggested it...

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