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[kissesfromcrazy]

ok now tell me what you think of my poems, truthfully please. pleees tell me any thing about what you think. i want input.
love the pirat
claire

Comments

[karlconka13]

I like the second one, the moment of love, a lot.

The one about your dad doesn't hit me as deep and it doesn't have as strong images.

[karlconka13]

The depressing one is good, but makes me uncomfortable reading it.

The very first one seems good, but I just skimmed it.

[muffins4prez]

I loved all of them! You have talent.