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A November 7 Evening Contract [Prompt #94]

Feb 20, 2016 14:08

Title: A November 7 Evening Contract
Rating: NC-17
Length: 6.5k
Warnings: flaky build-up, heat, smut, facial, unbeta’d, fluff
Summary: Shixun bought his father a catboy with an emergency back-up credit card from an underwear drawer.
Notes: Thank you to L for believing in me when this was pretty much mission impossible and thank you to S because ( Read more... )

kissfx round 2, day 7, nc-17, 2016

Comments 4

olympianlove February 21 2016, 01:20:54 UTC

KITTY YIXING!! AAAAAH! SO CUTE!! And shy, unsure business man Yifan. Like whaa... I love love love this. So cute!!

pseudo_shigure February 21 2016, 02:59:33 UTC

this is an interesting, fresh dynamic for a catboy!au. and sehun as kris' (and xing's) kid is always my aesthetic :)

reloadeds February 21 2016, 22:28:45 UTC

I would personally like to congratulate you on bringing some good (good) catboy smut into this world. I personally love hybrid au's, but a lot of the ones I've read are quite poorly executed. This one was cute, and has a very distinct charm to it. Kudos!

alright *cracks knuckles* let's get down to business:

kid!sekaitao already made me smile from the first 50 words in ESPECIALLY THE NINI PART OH MY GOD I SNORTED

“Right. And er, I swear on potatoes,” Tao added enthusiastically.
you had to didn't you

passed a hand in his wavy black hair
for some reason I got really aroused (bad word choice but you get it) in what this would look like; I think I've been around too much bald yifan and I'm having withdrawals

your vocabulary is (always) sublime and it makes me drool a little

Fortunately, he had had Shixun, his adopted son, lips-synching the angry clients with funny grimaces the whole time, making Yifan quietly laugh his heart out.
THIS WAS SO CUTE I COULD IMAGINE SEHUN'S EYEBROWS ALL SCRUNCHED UP AND OMG

Yifan’s birthday had thus ( ... )

cwtchbuddy February 26 2016, 09:11:16 UTC

OH MY GOD I'LL JUST THANK YOU FIRST FOR PICKING UP MY PROMPT!!! TEEHEE

Shixun you sneaky little you! I was thinking Shixun would be a bit older but the idea that he used his own father's card to buy him a hybrid is actually good cause it shows Yifan's side as a single father (who apparently gives out his password in his sleep LOL) And him knowing which gender his father would actually prefer XD

I like that it's not the cliché dominant!Yifan and obedient hybrid!Yixing, that you made Yifan confused even if we all know he kinda knows what he has to do with a hybrid in heat (Come on, Yifan!) There's even a manual! XD

I love that Yixing sort-of takes control during the relieving part…when he asked Yifan to pull his shirt up with teeth I just I exploded GAHD I CAN TOTALLY IMAGINE THE WHOLE SITUATION AND THAT WAS JUST FUCK SUPER HOT O)------< AND YIFAN ACTUALLY DOING IT /DEAD/

Yifan initiating the fingering…MY FUCKING GOD!! Love that Yixing's words are unabashed either Please finger fuck me. OH MY GOD WHO CAN SAY NO TO THAT???!!! WHOOO ( ... )