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Bleeding Out

Feb 22, 2016 09:58

Title: Bleeding Out
Rating: R
Length: 2583
Warnings: vampires
Summary: Yixing meets his love incarnate-who is a vampire hunter. Yixing just happens to be a vampire.
Notes: bad summary but basically xing’s like hey. im sad and old and u look like my long lost love so let me tell u my life story. L, thanks for believing in me <3

( He had stayed with him. Even when everything had changed, he had stayed )

kissfx round 2, 2016, day 9, r

Comments 3

olympianlove February 23 2016, 00:44:24 UTC

Oh no. You've made me cry. And I'm on a train right now. I don't even like angst but this is fucking amazing. The language alone gave me chills. It's only 2500+ words but I wish it was longer. Your language is truly amazing! Thank you for writing this! When I saw this prompt on the archive, I was expecting something ridiculously funny but this is good. This made me choke up. Good job!

beingexo February 23 2016, 01:08:42 UTC

Thank you so much for writing my prompt! I'm glad that they were able to be together in the end that that Yifan remembered Yixing.

cwtchbuddy March 13 2016, 17:42:30 UTC

I was a bit reluctant to read this at first cause it sounded so sad;-; But I'm glad that Fanxing were reunited in the end! What a pain it must have been for Yixing to keep his promise and be alone for all those years :( It was short but lovely! Great job! :)