the halo effect.

Oct 21, 2010 18:05


“I’m not a soldier, but I know how to pull the trigger.”*

He’s holding on to me between hail marys and I-never-should’ves. We’re standing on an empty subway platform and every so often a car will pass screeching horribly, sparking like stars on our underground sky where it’s never night. The wind rushes up to meet us and I see my ghostly face ( Read more... )

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thievesunite October 22 2010, 04:20:34 UTC
Wow. I really love things like this, short and sort of faceless and just kind of raw emotions. Definitely excellent. I almost want to request some sort of follow up, haha.

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kissmepurple October 25 2010, 20:43:52 UTC
Thank you so much! If I come up with a good follow up, I'll definitely dedicate it to you. Haha. <3

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lildaisy06 October 24 2010, 14:53:46 UTC
that was beautiful. Your imagery is strong and they leave a profound echo when you finish the story.
Thank you for writing this.

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kissmepurple October 25 2010, 20:44:04 UTC
Thank YOU for reading it.

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