untitled or the ocean breathes salty

[kissmepurple]

Comments

[sassy_cullen]

That is a really awesome story, that sounds strange doesn't is?

The interaction between the two characters is well written and interesting.

I love the last two lines, where they say 'hi' to each other.

Is there more to come of this story, or is this all? I really like your style of writing and I would be interested in reading more.

[kissmepurple]

Thank you so much!
I'm thinking of extending it into a novel for my Creative Writing course. I was just unsure about whether this was kind of pretentious and unrealistic. Thank you for the feedback!

[chthonic_scion]

Awh I really like this :3 I like the sort-of-twist at the end, where you reveal they don't actually know each other, and I like the impersonality of it before they exchange names! The end's very nice and etheral, a nice conclusion after the dialogue (: Really liking your style, thanks for sharing!

[kissmepurple]

Thank you for reading! <3

[thievesunite]

Oh my gosh. Jeez, I love everything you write.

[kissmepurple]

We should write something together.

[thievesunite]

We should!

[kissmepurple]

I don't know how to message you and I have no particular ideas. This shall be interesting. :P