AVALANCHE: Fresh Powder [2/?] -- PG

[kissontheneck]

[title] AVALANCHE: Fresh Powder [2/?]
[author] kissontheneck [aka fieryrogue]
[pairing] Cookleta, Marly UST, bromance!Mavid
[beta] jehane18 <=== ZOMG, really? :D
[rating] PG
[word count] 2568
[summary] David is on a nice holiday ski trip with his family. Unfortunately, he doesn't know how to ski, but a couple private lessons should remedy that problem.
[disclaimer] Surely, I

Comments

[rajkumari905]

laksjflksjdflskdfj GLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE I HOPE ALL YOUR UPDATES ARE THIS FAST 'CAUSE I LOVE THIS SFMMMMMMMMMM. SFM. ALSKFJDK GAH. <3 <3 <3

[kissontheneck]

OMG, do you have radar for this or what? I posted this like three seconds ago.

ALSO, WHAT ARE YOU DOING UP? IT'S A SCHOOL NIGHT.

[rajkumari905]

I AM MAGIC.

=D

ALSO, I WENT TO BED RIGHT AFTER, APPARENTLY 'CAUSE I DIDN'T GET THIS COMMENT TIL TODAY LOL

[kissontheneck]

YOU ARE MAGIC.

*sparkly wand spell spectral trail sort of things*

[asweetdownfall]

Hahahah oh my I love this so far. AND OMG the body contact/UST is gonna kill me.

Cook's going to be such a bad - I mean, GOOD - influence on David, I bet.

BTW YOU TOTES SHOULD HAVE A BANNER. IMO anyway. :)

[jehane_writes]

HEE. Sking kind of requires body contact! In my experience, anyway XDD

[asweetdownfall]

Hahaha I know but when Cook and Archie are involved you know it's not going to be mere body contact ;P

/pervy comment.

[kissontheneck]

GOOD influence. He's such a GOOD influence, okay? GOOOOD. *brainwashes you*

I KNOW, I NEED TO FIND PICS OF THEM IN WINTER CLOTHING. I THINK I HAVE ONE OF ARCHIE WEARING A SCARF, IT'S A GOOD START.

[jehane_writes]

*pulls on ski hat and goggles, kicks on skis*

It's loads of fun betaing for you, bb! Gear up and let's go, follow my tracks! XDD

And this story is SO MUCH FUN. Your Cook is so cocky ("Shoot, easiest three hundred bucks I ever made. Mike and I can hit the bar early today", LOVE), and the crease that crosses his forehead like a bunny slope is the most adorable description of Cook's forehead frown that I have ever read!

♥

Oh, and "two-by-fours", no apostrophe, and "You want to keep your body flexible" should have a following comma or semicolon. Sorry, betafail.

[kissontheneck]

AWW, BB, YOU'RE SO SWEET. ILU SFM. *tackles*

GRAMMAR FAIL, LOL. I just read it today and found a typo too. Gah! And I mean that on my part, not yours, never fear. When I get excited I make more mistakes, I guess! Hee!

*points at icon* This is my new cocky!Cook icon. KEYWORDS: Sexy And Knows It

[lire_casander]

You have a beta, and it's Jay!

I love this, like, a lot. Makes me believe in happy endings for some reason!

[jehane_writes]

Ahhh, I'm just her sking consultant. What, don't nobody ski, on Planet Cookleta? (I need a sking icon, I think!)

[kissontheneck]

OOoh, I'm so glad! You gotta believe, Mama! You gotta believe!

I should have you read my things now and again too! Remember when I used to do that? Ahhh, memories. (Haha, what am I saying??)

ILU! ♥

[lire_casander]

My girl is completely grown up *sniffs*

Well, Jay is far better a beta than I'll ever be, you know?

[pretendhappyend]

slakdjflajsdfljsdalfjdklsl

I love love love this! Archie's inner monologue is absolutely perfect.

What I love about good writers is that you make it all so natural and easy. Especially the dialogue. A lot of fics have been completely ruined for me because I end up thinking: "who on earth talks like that??"

Cocky Cook. Omg, in my pants ASAP! But since that's not gonna happen, get in Archie's! ;D

Damn, you're good. <3

Moar pls?? Lol I'm the most impatient person I know.

[kissontheneck]

LOL, thank you! Thanks for your awesome compliments, gosh! ♥

Cocky!Cook, at your service! *see new icon* Plz to be in the pants of pretendhappyend or kissontheneck or David Archuleta. Or all of the above.

OR, I MEAN.

[pretendhappyend]

Oh god that icon. O.O

His mouth, I can't even. Unffffff.

I'm such a Cook fangirl, gosh. :D