DR. FEELGOOD -- PG

Aug 11, 2010 00:33

[title] Dr. Feelgood
[author] kissontheneck [a.k.a. fieryrogue]
[pairing] Cookleta
[beta] Oh, I didn't bother this time. It's like old times! :D I just wanted to get this madness out, even with mistakes and awkwardness.
[rating] PG, I guess?
[word count] 3010 Sweet heavens! That's longer than I expected. (That's what she said!)
[summary] Archie is just cleaning the house ( Read more... )

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sara84 August 11 2010, 15:18:41 UTC
kissontheneck August 13 2010, 07:21:23 UTC
That book sounds interesting! Is it related to the movie by the same name? I suppose I could look that up for myself, LOL. Anyway, hooray! I'm glad you enjoyed it even with only a little familiarity! I've succeeded with the younger crowd! *fist pumps*

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sara84 August 13 2010, 13:47:16 UTC

james_padfoot August 11 2010, 15:49:10 UTC
OH MY GOD.

First of all, the music. omg.

and second how domestic and real and also i do this all the time, but not with a turntable i wish i had that, but also i just. and so clearly in my mind.

and just. hot hot hot.

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kissontheneck August 13 2010, 07:24:39 UTC
Haha, thank you so much, oh my gosh! ♥ LOL, strangely I suddenly felt like cleaning the house tomorrow which is weird, but if I had that kind of music I'd do it all the time! Maybe this is the answer to all my problems with cleaning! (And maybe DCook will show up and tease me before kissing me suddenly? IDK.)

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kissontheneck August 13 2010, 07:26:24 UTC
Oh hooray, thank you so much! I'm glad it was still enjoyable even without the kind of background "noise" of the songs being familiar. :D

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otherbella August 11 2010, 15:51:30 UTC
GAHHHHHHHH I LOVED THIS SO MUCH! I KNOW there are other fans of these guys who are my age but I love being reminded of it.

I LOVE CLEANING THE HOUSE TO HAIR METAL TOO! Something about it makes you want to move!

Although Archie. bb. Rule #1 of living with a boyfriend. NEVER THROW OUT THE HOLEY TSHIRTS. Those are non-negotiable.

I loved the falling into all of them though, so sweet and sentimental and really kind of stealth hot - Arche going face first in all those shirts that smell like Cook. That picture is really vivid.

The end with Cook coming in on him, pulling him up, dancing with him, singing to him and the Dr Feelgood - really REALLY hot.

Established relationship that's mature but still playful and loving? My favorite genre.

THIS WAS SO GOOD. REREADING AGAIN, WITH SOUNDTRACK. (Thank you for that, btw! I didn't have to go into iTunes and make my own!!)

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kissontheneck August 13 2010, 07:30:53 UTC
There is something really energizing about that music, isn't there? Something that's lost these days, I think. It's very party music and not so glum like I feel a lot of more recent music is. Idk, maybe I'm listening to the wrong radio stations then, but yeah.

Haha, Archie's so gonna get in trouble for weeding out Cook's holey shirts. Cook will probably forgive him though. Maybe. XD

I sooo like the bit of him tumbling into the shirts. It's something I would do so I had to have him do it.

Yay, thank you so much! Your comment is making my face hurt with smiles! (LOL, that sounded cheesy. STILL. ♥)

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asweetdownfall August 11 2010, 15:52:43 UTC
Eeeeee this was awesome! And adorable and funny and *_______* the ending melted my brain. Gah.

Also the mental imagery of David rocking out to Quiet Riot is priceless. :D

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kissontheneck August 13 2010, 07:42:36 UTC
Eee, thank you!

Rocking out!David is adorable! I bet it does that for real. When no one's home. Or when he thinks no one is home. ;)

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