[title] Dr. Feelgood
[author]
kissontheneck [a.k.a.
fieryrogue]
[pairing] Cookleta
[beta] Oh, I didn't bother this time. It's like old times! :D I just wanted to get this madness out, even with mistakes and awkwardness.
[rating] PG, I guess?
[word count] 3010 Sweet heavens! That's longer than I expected. (That's what she said!)
[summary] Archie is just cleaning the house
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First of all, the music. omg.
and second how domestic and real and also i do this all the time, but not with a turntable i wish i had that, but also i just. and so clearly in my mind.
and just. hot hot hot.
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I LOVE CLEANING THE HOUSE TO HAIR METAL TOO! Something about it makes you want to move!
Although Archie. bb. Rule #1 of living with a boyfriend. NEVER THROW OUT THE HOLEY TSHIRTS. Those are non-negotiable.
I loved the falling into all of them though, so sweet and sentimental and really kind of stealth hot - Arche going face first in all those shirts that smell like Cook. That picture is really vivid.
The end with Cook coming in on him, pulling him up, dancing with him, singing to him and the Dr Feelgood - really REALLY hot.
Established relationship that's mature but still playful and loving? My favorite genre.
THIS WAS SO GOOD. REREADING AGAIN, WITH SOUNDTRACK. (Thank you for that, btw! I didn't have to go into iTunes and make my own!!)
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Haha, Archie's so gonna get in trouble for weeding out Cook's holey shirts. Cook will probably forgive him though. Maybe. XD
I sooo like the bit of him tumbling into the shirts. It's something I would do so I had to have him do it.
Yay, thank you so much! Your comment is making my face hurt with smiles! (LOL, that sounded cheesy. STILL. ♥)
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Also the mental imagery of David rocking out to Quiet Riot is priceless. :D
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Rocking out!David is adorable! I bet it does that for real. When no one's home. Or when he thinks no one is home. ;)
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