AVALANCHE: Falling Leaf [4/?] -- PG

[kissontheneck]

[title] AVALANCHE: Falling Leaf [4/?]
[author] kissontheneck [aka fieryrogue]
[pairing] Cookleta, Marly UST, bromance!Mavid
[beta] the unique snowflake known as jehane18
[rating] PG
[word count] 4772
[summary] David is on a nice holiday ski trip with his family. Unfortunately, he doesn't know how to ski, but a couple private lessons should remedy that problem.
[disclaimer]

Comments

[rajkumari905]

laskdjfsklfj YAYYYYYYYYY. I LOVE THIS STORYYYYYYYYYYY SO MUCH.

I love this! And awwwwwwww at Cook. Awwwwwwww.

AND AND. CAN THEY PLEASE MAKE OUT IN THE SNOW AT SOME POINT IN THIS STORY. I would like that to happen :D :D :D

[jehane_writes]

(I WILL SEE WHAT ME AND MY BETA STICK CAN DO <33333333)

[kissontheneck]

IT IS ON THE LIST OF POSSIBILITIES. ;D

[mitchiemarie]

;D
<333
its so cute how flaily archie is!!
of never ceases to make me squee
<33 I love this
xD
and of course want more ^^ ;D

[kissontheneck]

Thank you! As always, I appreciate the comments! Haha, I like a flaily Archie as well. :D

[asmallsmackerel]

ACK. Seriously, I look forward to everything that you do. The way that you build the DC/DA relationship in all that you've written is just always so REAL to me. Real and natural and beautiful and just. Just yeah, this fic is no exception. They are getting to know each other as people, and are already connecting so well on a level that most people can't.

And it just leaves me like this: ♥__________♥

[kissontheneck]

Oohh, you're so precious, thank you! I do try hard to make their relationship meaningful, so I'm so happy to hear that you think I'm heading in that direction. Hooray!

Gosh, your comment is so wonderfuuuul. Thank you. ♥

[abovetheruins]

HOW EXCITED WAS I TO SEE MORE OF THIS? XD

Aw, the awkwardness <333 I'm so excited to see where you take this.

[kissontheneck]

Oh yay! Thank you so much, I'm so glad that you're enjoying it! Not only enjoying but ~anticipating. That makes my heart all tingly! :D More to come!

[kissontheneck]

Thank you for your great comment! I love that you've said something about Cook's story because I was starting to wonder if anyone read that part, LOL. Anyway, thank you for reading and commenting! It means so much to me. :)