AVALANCHE: Après Ski [5/?] -- PG

[kissontheneck]

[title] AVALANCHE: Après Ski [5/?]
[author] kissontheneck [aka fieryrogue]
[pairing] Cookleta, Marly UST, bromance!Mavid
[beta] my snow angel jehane18
[rating] PG
[word count] 6468! This is really long! (THAT'S WHAT COOK SAID.)
[summary] David is on a nice holiday ski trip with his family. Unfortunately, he doesn't know how to ski, but a couple private lessons should remedy that

Comments

[penrith1]

What a wonderful surprise to see this again and a real pleasure to reread. This was always one of my favourites so I'm doing a happy dance to see it again. :))
This is like visiting Cookleta old school. All the usual suspects and the wonderfully awkward young David and the awesome Cook.
I adored the singing and the smouldering looks between the guys. I hope you can finish this cause you know I always love to see the Dad we all love to hate being outsmarted. Haha

[kissontheneck]

Yay, happy dances! I can handle happy dances. That makes me happy! (Of course!)

Old school Cookleta is still my favorite, so I think I still write that way a lot. So yay! I love the old crew dearly still.

Haha, indeed!

[rhiminee_1]

YES YES YES YES, COOOOOK, IT IS YOU HE'S LOOKING FOR!!!!!

holy hell. idek.

I love this story. So much. <333333333

[kissontheneck]

Thank youuuu. ♥♥♥

Heee, yay for the shout out to his sung inquiry. THE ANSWER IS YES, COOK. The answer is yes.

[rajkumari905]

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WRITE THAT NEXT CHAPTER.

NOW.

LSDKJAFOEWIJFLSDKF.

[bigwhoop4u]

^ What she said, exactly.^

[kissontheneck]

YOU PEOPLE ARE SO DEMANDING.

(Oh, okay.)

[therealesther]

UPDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATE I AM EXCITE

[therealesther]

*finishes reading*

agree. i LOVE karaoke interludes in fics, and reading the davids' reactions to hearing each other sing for the first time :)

love the nameless cameos by other american idol contestants too (i seeeeeeee you bb kris XD)

AND YOU HAD FLIRTY!COOKLUPE!!! :DDDDDD WITH SHOCKED!JEALOUS?ARCHIE :DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD LOVE THIS.

and DNW jeff >_< being a big meany >_< argh. this cannot end well...

[kissontheneck]

LOL, SRSLY, I FEEL LIKE THAT FLIRTY COOKLUPE HAS HAD TO HAVE HAPPENED IRL, RIGHT? RIIIGHTT?? Archie's faaaace, srsly.

Hee, yes! BB Kris made it in! I was afraid all that would be too cheesy, but it seems you guys enjoyed it so I'm so glad! :D

THANK YOUUUUUU!! ♥♥♥

[kissontheneck]

Aww, thank you for your fantastic comment! I wish I had time to update it more often, but I do what I can! I want to try to get the next one out sooner rather than later. :D