Comments | kissontheneck: SHE'S NOT YOU -- PG

kissontheneck

SHE'S NOT YOU -- PG

May 10, 2011 17:27

[title] She's Not You
[author] kissontheneck [a.k.a. fieryrogue]
[pairing] Cookleta, Archie/OFC
[beta] That girl who makes me do everything, aohatsu
[rating] PG (including one sprig of off-color Cook language)
[word count] 4492
[summary] She has soft hair and crystal blue eyes, is amazing at violin and volunteers at the animal shelter on Saturdays. Basically she's perfect ( Read more... )

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Comments 25

carolion May 11 2011, 01:02:55 UTC

wahhhhhhhh oh my boysssssss ♥

IT'S HARD TO SEE ARCHIE ALL ANGSTY AND TUMULTUOUS

kissontheneck May 16 2011, 04:32:17 UTC

I KNOW, I KNOW. IT'S HARD TO ~WRITE TOO. AND ARCHIE WITH A GIRL DISRUPTS MY EQUILIBRIUM.

They're okay in the end! Well, we assume? *mysterious*

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kissontheneck May 16 2011, 04:33:27 UTC

Yes, it all its flaily "OMG WHAT ARE YOU DOOINNGGG?" goodness. ;)

asweetdownfall May 11 2011, 01:15:00 UTC

afndlsafldsjfl Oh my heck this is STUNNING. I loooove how you included 'The Last Goodbye' and 'She's Not You' (ugh, boys, stop moping around and get it together, geez) and everything from David's emotions to the KISS omg is so vivid and afnslasgsrjf did I mention that your prose is gorgeous? AND THE LAST LINE, FUCK. My soul is slayed.

ANYWAY. You wrote a beautiful, exquisite and amazing fic. *________________* And your iPod is awesome, jsyk. IT SHIPS COOKLETA.

(Oh, and I adore the angst. ADORE.)

kissontheneck May 16 2011, 04:37:38 UTC

AWW BB! *holds* *mends soul*

Thank you so much though, gosh! I felt very, very anxious about it to be honest, but aohatsu pushed me, like hard. It's annoying how much they mope though, isn't it? Like just get over yourselves already, LOL.

My iPod totally ships Cookleta, as it should. GOOD IPOD, I HAVE TRAINED YOU WELL.

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kissontheneck May 16 2011, 04:39:31 UTC

Eeep! I'm glad you still made it through! It was hard writing him with someone else, actually. I was fighting with him the whole time. He was saying "nooooooo" and I was like, "Don't you understand? SHE'S NOT COOK. GET IT? GET. IT. COOPERATE."

Anyway, thanks so much! I appreciate it and I'm glad you liked it!

idolfangal May 11 2011, 02:50:29 UTC

This needs to happen IRL.

kissontheneck May 16 2011, 04:40:06 UTC

Right? Right? It's coming, I can feel it.