YOÜ AND I -- R

[kissontheneck]

[title] Yoü and I
[author] kissontheneck [a.k.a. fieryrogue]
[pairing] Cookleta
[beta] None, so, you know.
[rating] R-ish?, language and sexual situations
[word count] 5314
[summary] David's been gone for two years, but now he's back in town.
[disclaimer] Surely, I have nothing to do with either of these fine young men, no matter how much I wish I did.
[warnings] Angsty

Comments

[leici]

Gosh, that was just lovely. I like the way you went back and forth in the timeline, the way you laid things out without being heavy handed. I got some great mental images there, while reading. Wonderful stuff.

[kissontheneck]

Thank you so much for your comments, I really appreciate them. Each one of those things were things I worried about a bit, but you've assured me now that I did all right. So thanks! :D

[archieluvin]

Oh my..it has been a long time since I was reduced to tears from reading a Cookleta fic, I hurt for both guys and was glad for the wonderful ending...Thank You for writing & posting!

[kissontheneck]

Oh my gosh, tears! I'm glad it instilled some ~emotions though. I'm not always that nice to the boys, but I like eliciting feelings from people, so I guess I did okay! :)

[honeybeemmw]

I have to say, I'm not a fan of the Gaga song but I love how you wove the lyrics in between the scenes. Simply loved this fic...even though it hurt my heart. So glad David came back to Cook at the end. "Come Back To Me" is now their theme song for the next two years for me. <3

[kissontheneck]

Wow, thanks for reading anyway even though you're not too fond of the song! Yes, "Come Back To Me" is totally the Cookleta anthem now.

[soco63]

This is beautiful ♥

[kissontheneck]

Thank you! :D

[nazalea]

favourite so far!!

[kissontheneck]

Woot! Thank you! :D