ANGELS: She Breathes Flesh To My Bones [1/?] -- R

[kissontheneck]

[title] ANGELS: She Breathes Flesh To My Bones
[author] kissontheneck [a.k.a. fieryrogue]
[beta] clionona, the queen
[pairing] Cookleta
[rating] R
[word count] 2640
[summary] David will always be protected by the ones who love him.
[disclaimer] Surely, I have nothing to do with either of these fine young men, no matter how much I wish I did.
[warnings] Angst. Violence. Abuse.

Comments

[lc_writings]

No! God, why do you want me to murder Jeff? I hate him already, no need for you to dig into it!

So that's where the line came from, huh?

All I wanted was to take him and throw him out the window. And I'm worried about Lupe, because I know how that works... She will never leave him, right?

You broke my heart with this. *cries*

[kissontheneck]

Aww, *picks up heart pieces*

As for Lupe... well... yeah, I think you know how it goes. Or at least for the continuing drama of storytelling, that's how it goes. Oooh, Archuleta family, be safe!

[penrith1]

Immediately caught up in another great story. Cookie to the rescue I love it. Can't wait for next chapter.

[kissontheneck]

Ay yi yi, and there isn't one planned yet, but I know this has to go on. *pressure*

Thanks for the nice comment! It is love! :D

[clionona]

YAY!!!
YOU POSTED!!!
*dances*

You know how I feel about this. *g*

It's brilliant and poignant and gorgeous.

Oh, and SEQUEL PLEASE!!! XD [sorry, had to be done!]

And I'm not the queen of anything! XD

[kissontheneck]

Oh, you and your call for sequels! Except I can see how this is totally not over. *starts drafting novel*

YOU ARE THE QUEEN. YOU'RE THE QUEEN OF THE WOOOORRRLLLD. *Titanic moment*

[clionona]

*heart arms*

=)

[kissontheneck]

Gosh, I don't know if I can ever go back to heart hands again, LOL.

[archieluvin]

I read this thinking...good storyline I like it... then I got to the end and the very last line got to me and here I am at work again crying...I'm sure if anyone ever catches me crying as many times as some of these fics make me cry...they are going to have me committed for treatment...Awesome Job!!!

~~~~~~~~~~ ♥ ~~~~~~~~~~
Whether I’m right or wrong…”

--David Archuleta, “Angels”
~~~~~~~~~~ ♥ ~~~~~~~~~~

[kissontheneck]

*grabs you and hugs you like WHOA*

You got it. You totally got it. Yes, that one line really pushed a lot of where I was trying to go... emphasizing that even when he's epically "wrong", she's still there. *big sigh* You rule for that.

Now stop crying at work! I know how that goes... "Please excuse me, I have to go cry in the bathroom now because I read this totally depressing Cookleta story..."

[archieluvin]

OH BB this is NOT depressing, just written so well that it brings out a lot of emotions...

[kissontheneck]

Ohh, thank you, bb. Yes, it's pretty frackin' emotional. It's difficult for me to read! I wrote the dang thing!

[sunnyolaf]

Oh gosh that left me breathless.

[kissontheneck]

Oh gosh, your lovely comment leaves me breathless. Thank you. :)