Comments | kissontheneck: SEVEN MINUTES IN HEAVEN -- PG-13

kissontheneck

SEVEN MINUTES IN HEAVEN -- PG-13

Mar 29, 2009 16:51

[title] Seven Minutes in Heaven
[author] kissontheneck [a.k.a. fieryrogue]
[pairing] Cookleta
[beta] A who now? LOL.
[rating] PG-13
[word count] 2469
[summary] Apparently, Michael Johns is 30 going on 12.
[disclaimer] Surely, I have nothing to do with either of these fine young men, no matter how much I wish I did.
[warnings] Total drunken insanity.
[author's notes] For clionona ( Read more... )

Comments 65

almost_maybe March 30 2009, 01:22:34 UTC

I'm dying from laughter here! That was INCREDIBLY FUNNY. Archie cleaning up, the drunk banter, Cook faking it, the hot first kiss, Archie praying he was dead were just awesome beyond words. And I love how everybody was so IC. We need more drunk Cook and the boys!

And wow, you are the best. This was exactly the pick me up I needed after hearing the news about DC. Definitely mem-ing this for future re-reading and general flailingness. Thank you! <3

kissontheneck March 31 2009, 02:08:31 UTC

Oh goodness, a memories add? *does not even know how to respond* Talk about a compliment! Thank you, bb! ♥

I am soooo glad you thought it was so funny! That just makes me giddy beyond belief. :D And to be a little pick up in a sad time... well, that makes my heart smooshy. ♥

coloronthewalls March 30 2009, 01:35:37 UTC

David now felt like he'd rather not ever leave the Johns' closet, and wondered if he could manage to get a keyboard in there.

LOLOLOL. This was fantastic, I was giggling the whole way through. And I second the request for a sequel. ;)

kissontheneck March 31 2009, 02:15:57 UTC

I contemplated him wondering if he could get his Quidditch gear in there, but then I realized I was thinking of a different fandom... XD

Hee hee, I'm so glad you liked it! I think the demand is high enough that I have to do the sequel... OY, THE PRESSURE. XD

clionona March 30 2009, 01:49:20 UTC

Oh my god!
Oh my god!
OH MY GOD!

You are too much, bb!!!

*flails and squees and dies*

For me????????????

*flyingtacklehugs*

This was amazing in every way! Beautiful and funny and sweet!!! Drunk!Cook is my favorite and the entire situation was just too much!!!

♥!

Awesome! And thank you so much, bb!

kissontheneck March 31 2009, 02:19:31 UTC

Hehehe, yes for YOU. For many reasons, for you, for david_squared, for HUMANITY. I just can't believe that a thing I cranked out to get something posted in david_squared quickly has become such a hit. So I guess it's a GREAT gift too. WOOT.

So glad you love it. Weeeee! ♥

odi_et_amo53 March 30 2009, 01:51:04 UTC

OH YES. YESYESYESYES.

I am SUCH a sucker for party game fics. Cook, omg Cook, there aren't even words for it XD And you made my life with the keyboard in the closet line.

And best summary everrrr LOL

kissontheneck March 31 2009, 02:26:22 UTC

I am so amused that the keyboard in the closet line was your favorite! XD I wanted so badly for him to wonder if he could get a school trunk and an owl cage in there, but then I realized I was thinking of another fandom... oops.

Haha, that summary is sooo not even a summary for the story, clearly. But thank you! Hee hee, I'm glad you enjoyed it! ♥

bigwhoop4u March 30 2009, 01:59:46 UTC

Omigosh! This did def put a smile on my face, bb!!
The boys locked in a closet together (well, with everyone eavesdropping on the other side)!
"I just had my first kiss" *sigh*
But the part where Cook was headed to the closet by himself had me totes LMFAO!!!
Great job, bb!

kissontheneck March 31 2009, 02:31:31 UTC

The image of him doing this is so real in my head, that every time someone mentions this, I crack the hell up. So... yeah. XD

Thank you, bb! I'm ecstatic that you loved it! ♥