ZERO GRAVITY -- PG

May 04, 2009 22:14

[title] Zero Gravity
[author] kissontheneck [a.k.a. fieryrogue]
[pairing] Cookleta
[beta] None. You may harrass me if there are verb tense problems, LOL.
[rating] PG, language
[word count] 1717
[summary] The difference one person can make.
[disclaimer] Surely, I have nothing to do with either of these fine young men, no matter how much I wish I did.
[warnings] Serious ( Read more... )

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magickaldreamer May 5 2009, 15:45:31 UTC
Today is going to be a blah-filled, rainy day with a dash of final papers, and this is just what I needed to start off with to put me in the right mood.

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kissontheneck May 7 2009, 05:37:35 UTC
I hope it helped! And thank you! ♥

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motherendurance May 5 2009, 19:41:36 UTC
What a beautiful beautiful story. And with a tricky POV too! I am all admiration, REALLY!

I think you just caught the feeling, the essence of that exact mood, and expressed it just perfectly.

(Runs to bookmark this, then check out everything else I can find of yours...)

~Mama E.

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kissontheneck May 7 2009, 05:43:41 UTC
Oh goodness, thank you, darling! I am quite flattered! ♥ Thank you!

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deadlysunrise May 5 2009, 19:57:07 UTC
-flails-
Awwwww.
This was just so...so cute.
It didn't even matter to me that bb D didn't get there until the end because I could just feel the emotions really overflowing in this piece throughout.
David's day stunk. Then came Archie and the world was good. Such a simple idea, but so wonderfully portrayed in this.
The way that you wrote it was really beautiful to me.
It made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside.
-squishes Archie-
I want someone that is as endearing as him. D:
But yeah, you? Equals total win.
This is a very lovely piece.
-bookmarks it-

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kissontheneck May 7 2009, 05:45:07 UTC
Oh, thank you, dear! I am quite flattered by your entire comment. ♥

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churchslackzluv May 5 2009, 21:00:40 UTC
SO...ADORABLE. -flail-

Sounds like a sucky day. Raining? It's been doing that here for God knows how long. To make you feel any better Cook, I SLIPPED ON THE BUS THE OTHER DAY. And hit my leg. And cursed out loud. But whatever.

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kissontheneck May 7 2009, 06:38:41 UTC
The rain was totally influenced by the fact that it was pouring here where I live and it kind of kick started the whole thing.

Oh gosh, Cook hopes you are okay after all of that! ♥

(Also, thank youuu!)

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penrith1 May 6 2009, 09:45:40 UTC
Thank you. No angst for me today. I just could not bear it. Loving this for the happiness and comfort at the end.

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kissontheneck May 7 2009, 06:40:04 UTC
Aww, thank you so much! Glad it wasn't angsty for you! :D

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