ANGELS: No Good Deed [2/?] -- R

Jul 20, 2009 21:28

[title] ANGELS: No Good Deed [2/?]
[author] kissontheneck [a.k.a. fieryrogue]
[beta] Thank you, rajkumari905!! ♥ ♥
[pairing] Cookleta
[rating] R, language, adult situations (?)
[word count] 3857
[summary] David will always be protected by the ones who love him.
[disclaimer] Surely, I have nothing to do with either of these fine young men, no matter how much I wish I did.
[warnings] ( Read more... )

chaptered: angels

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rajkumari905 July 21 2009, 05:12:58 UTC
aldkfjsldkfjlkjd CLIFFHANGER.

<3333

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kissontheneck July 25 2009, 16:27:16 UTC
It's just like Days of Our Lives or something. XD

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kirabella1588 July 21 2009, 05:44:59 UTC
OK, so youre totally not allowed to leave me in tears like this. More. And if I have to wait 4 months Ill be even more sad than I am now.

This is an AWESOME story, even if its really really hard to read

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kissontheneck July 25 2009, 16:28:33 UTC
Thank you so much, I'm always nervous about topics like this. I promise to work on it more often, I swear! ♥

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churchslackzluv July 21 2009, 06:02:26 UTC
oh fuck. I read SBFTMB again, and I cried, totally cried. then I read this and just CRIED SOME MORE. the ending left me with chills because holy shit, Cook didn't do anything except help Archie. you assholes, let him go.

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kissontheneck July 25 2009, 16:30:34 UTC
Oooh, bb, please don't cry! I promise things will get better, you'll see. ♥

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jehane_writes July 21 2009, 06:17:18 UTC
HOLY FREAKING SHIT.

NOOOOOOOO.

Cook, for the love of GOD, CALL YOUR LAWYER NEXT TIME *BEFORE* GOING IN THERE. Don't you freaking watch TV?!? Don't you see the cops giving you shit?!?

*tries to breathe deeply* I knooooow clients who do this. WHYYYYY. CALL FIRST. FIRST.

ummm, sorry, bb! (hides) tremendous story, btw.

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kissontheneck July 25 2009, 16:32:02 UTC
I know, right? Cook is not thinking that far ahead yet, he's just pissed off. Poor bb.

Thank you!

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lire_casander July 21 2009, 09:45:36 UTC
I think I hate you, like a lot. Not only did you leave us with that cliffhanger of hell, but also you left it right there, with Cook being accused of exactly what he has been trying to avoid all along.

I have started thinking that Archie might have told something to the docs, but they were so focused on the scene Cook was causing that they haven't even realized that someone the sze of Archie can never stand a chance against someone like Cook, so maybe it hasn't been Cook? But hey, this is Murray, so maybe Cook is the bad guy here since he is a fucking sinner and a corrupter, isn't he?

Now, I hope Lupe and the kids made it in one piece, because I need to fucking kill Jeff and I don't want any witnesses.

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kissontheneck July 25 2009, 16:34:21 UTC
Cook is definitely getting some very biased behavior from these people, dang it. Sometimes people are just bastards. Poor Cookie.

Hmm, I think Jeff will be home alone for a little while, I'll look the other way if I happen to see you going down his street.

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