a letter

Aug 26, 2009 23:05

Jaejoong / Yoochun
2,562 words, g
Prompt suggested by yuki-joongie. I'm sorry this took so long but i really enjoyed writing it, thank you for the idea :D i hope that this is good enough and that you'll enjoy reading :)

i think i’ve been looking for you ever since i was born )

pairing: yoochun/jaejoong, length: oneshot

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90956 August 27 2009, 09:32:11 UTC
Thank you i'm so glad to hear that ♥

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engraved_16 August 27 2009, 07:55:45 UTC
wow this was really beautiful
&hearts &hearts &hearts

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90956 August 27 2009, 09:32:34 UTC
Thanks a lot for reading and for the compliment ^^ ♥

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90956 August 28 2009, 03:34:30 UTC
Thanks a lot for reading and for the compliment ^^ Jaechun is my otp therefore i guess i'll only write Jaechun ♥ Glad you enjoyed this one :)

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ryther August 27 2009, 16:10:24 UTC
hands down. this fic was playing in my mind as i was reading it and god, i think i'm in love with them even more. there's nothing purer than what jaejoong felt, looking for his other half is what each person in the world is doing and what he did seems so real.

the realization was amazing. the love was undeniable. the feelings were neutral. sometimes it takes a decade, but sometimes you just didn't notice it.

i love you and thank YOU! because you makes me all giddy and happy and i felt like i need to write down this fic in my head asap...coz like most writers, they need a kick in the head to start and writing the piece they have in mind.

wonderful fabulous amazing love and all the adjectives which carries the same meaning goes to you.

mute yoochun is understandable. lost jaejoong is realistic.mix it and you'll get an awesome soulmate.

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ryther August 27 2009, 16:11:36 UTC
the feeling were natural! not neutral...lol

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90956 August 28 2009, 03:37:19 UTC
XD i understood it anyway typos happen ♥

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90956 August 28 2009, 03:37:00 UTC
Wow darling ;A; your compliments blew me away they're too flattering ♥ i'm so so glad that you liked this fic that much and that means a lot to me ^^ your detailed comments also made me happy and i appreciate how you read this fic so carefully ♥

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jaeluvsme August 27 2009, 16:43:45 UTC
They’re sitting next to each other on the bench at the bus stop for the second time. Yoochun pokes Jaejoong in the shoulder and points at his own feet. They’re tapping along the melody that comes from across the street. Jaejoong laughs, and he starts tapping his feet as well.

my fave part!

Yunho drops his books in front of the apartment; his mouth is in the shape of a big fat O. “Didn’t you just leave for Greece yesterday?”

“It was too hot.” Jaejoong replies.

love how jae's mysterious mind works <3

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90956 August 28 2009, 03:37:45 UTC
Thanks a lot for reading and glad you liked it :) ♥

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