Comments | kissthecoffin: Sweet Revenge, Sweet Love, Sweet Irony, Ch. 5

kissthecoffin

Sweet Revenge, Sweet Love, Sweet Irony, Ch. 5

Jul 15, 2009 06:15

Title: Sweet Revenge, Sweet Love, Sweet Irony ( Read more... )

a: kissthecoffin, p: jaemin

Comments 16

mimz_song July 15 2009, 14:24:24 UTC

Add me I wanna read this whole fic xD

mimz_song July 15 2009, 21:40:47 UTC

O__________________O
They're brothers?
And wait...Changmin's mom died because JaeJoong didn't let Min go then? O_O
WTF!?
Damn...Poor Jae T_T Min will give him hell *shivers* Update soon T_T

pawshingo July 15 2009, 14:53:08 UTC

Jaejoong, the indirect murderer! Changmin is really chillingly scary to the bone! So twisted. Does Yunho really likes/cares for jaejoong or is he part of Minnie's twisted plan? This is good!

natipooh July 15 2009, 15:00:48 UTC

OOOHHH!!!! The horror!!! :-O
Changmin and Yunho are borthers??? Man, I didn't see that coming!
I don't like the YunJae but Yunho was super sweet with Jaejoongie here.
I hope Changmin will gradually start falling for Jaejoong despite all the crap that's been going on between them...
I'll be waiting for your next update! :D

sikomoxd July 15 2009, 17:11:57 UTC

TT_TT
not yunho, but jaejoong
indirect murderer... Poor min
Please update soon
i need the sweet love parts
>.

marieluna July 15 2009, 20:40:59 UTC

Mhm... I have been reading all the chapters till now... and I have only one question... PLEASE, please, check the spelling! I beg of you, don't torture the story like this! There are verbs that are to the present tense instead of the past tense, nouns completely misspelled, and the ever present "HIS" (used to describe a posses... like "This is HIS book") instead of "HIM" (pronoun, Jaejoong raised HIMself off the ground). The last one is a basic grammar rule... please correct your mistakes, they really ruin your story. Sorry if it sounds bossy, but I can't find it in me to read a story that is not grammatically correct. I just can't. And it pains me, because other than that, the story is good, so please keep posting, after spell checking the new chapters.

kissthecoffin July 15 2009, 22:55:37 UTC

Sorry. I don't have spell checker and I usually write at night before I sleep. Dx I'll be sure to go though all them today and fix up all the errors.

Sorry about that, didn't know how bad it really was.

marieluna July 16 2009, 07:42:38 UTC

^-^ me is a very happy reader... hope you are not offended, I just felt like telling you because the story is worth it =) Thank you.