Comments | kissthecoffin: Sweet Revenge, Sweet Love, Sweet Irony, Ch. 6

kissthecoffin

Sweet Revenge, Sweet Love, Sweet Irony, Ch. 6

Jul 21, 2009 15:42

Title: Sweet Revenge, Sweet Love, Sweet Irony ( Read more... )

a: kissthecoffin, p: jaemin, !fanfic

Comments 9

kioku_kagami July 21 2009, 23:03:06 UTC

spot~ I'm going to read all the chapters and then comment again!~

Shimriu kioku_kagami July 21 2009, 23:49:30 UTC

How,to read rest of your story?i dont have lj so i cant friend u.

kioku_kagami July 22 2009, 00:20:08 UTC

wow!~~ I'm totally in love with this fic! I think that my feelings for Changmin and Jaejoong are kinda even now since it was Jaejoong keeping him away from his mother, in Changmin's eyes...

I think I feel the worst for Yunho lol I just want him to be happy actually~

natipooh July 22 2009, 02:45:13 UTC

I loved this chapter. Yes, there are some typos but nothing terrible.
Even though I noticed Yunho's feelings for JJ I didn't see the sex part coming! Poor Jaejoongie, he's had some rough times on the streets.
If Changmin finds them in bed he will go nuts.... :-S
Thanks for sharing and please update soon! ;-)

irene014 July 22 2009, 04:02:09 UTC

wow o.O the sex was unexpected in this chapter but i knew it was gonna happen eventually...

i'm really curious what is going to happen next when Jae goes back to the streets...

i liked this chapter the typos really didn't bother me though lol

yuei_vuisaki July 22 2009, 05:35:25 UTC

*the yunjae-nees kill me, i'll revive after u give me some jaemin XD*

roseltv July 22 2009, 12:32:09 UTC

More Yunjae and less Jaemin ? I will wait patiently for a Jaejoong's change of heart XD