Comments | kissthecoffin: Sweet Revenge, Sweet Love, Sweet Irony, Ch. 10

kissthecoffin

Sweet Revenge, Sweet Love, Sweet Irony, Ch. 10

Aug 17, 2009 05:13

Title: Sweet Revenge, Sweet Love, Sweet Irony ( Read more... )

a: kissthecoffin, pairing: jaejoong/changmin, rating: nc-17

Comments 10

kimheechulmiki August 17 2009, 12:44:14 UTC

I like it! Not much action though but lots of talking. LOL When's my birthday? That sure left ChangMin tongue tied! I'm rooting for JaeMin! But isn't ChangMin overdoing the begging for forgiveness bit? Doesn't he need to go to work? Thanks for the update.

pawshingo August 17 2009, 13:14:43 UTC

Dialogues are important! But the men of this family are a bit clingy but I like seeing that in Changmin. A change from his arrogant self in the beginning. So what's happening to Minnie's career? I hope that b'day question will make Minnie strive harder to win Jae!

izanamiwiles August 17 2009, 16:48:29 UTC

I liked it a lot! I'm a new reader, but I grew very interested in that story and quite quickly. So thanx a lot for writing it! I really like how you've made changmin personnality evolved.
=^^= can't wait to read the rest!

reya13 August 17 2009, 17:00:26 UTC

roseltv August 17 2009, 20:37:57 UTC

OK, now, Yunho is freaking me out. And it's not a good thing at all.