Comments | kitausu: Take Your Time (Coming Home)

kitausu

Take Your Time (Coming Home)

Jan 16, 2011 10:41

Fandom: Star Trek XI
Character(s)/Pairing: Kirk/Spock, Winona
Rating: PG-13
Wordcount: 1641
Summary: The first time Winona meets Spock, she terrifies him and makes him tea. For Winona, it's a study in trying not to fall apart.
Notes: Title is a song by Fun. Cut text from the song "Barlights," also by Fun.

( I don't need to be reminded that this is how it was. )

winona, star trek, oneshot, kirk, jim kirk, kirk/spock, spock

Comments 12

lulabel January 16 2011, 21:39:42 UTC

Lovely. Very evocative and emotionally heartfelt without being sentimental or sappy.

mockingbirdq January 16 2011, 21:42:17 UTC

I like your writing style a lot. There's something very real about your Winona.

wrapmeinlace January 16 2011, 21:58:40 UTC

I enjoyed reading this. It was bittersweet and melancholy, but not overly sad. Winona feels very genuine here.

karmic_fic January 16 2011, 22:05:32 UTC

wistful and endearing, thank you

1bill_sookie January 16 2011, 22:25:43 UTC

love it, very good pov, moving and powerful.