Beckoning (am i your dream lover?)
Beckoning (am i your dream lover?)
Chapter One// God Hands
“Yumi…?”
Such a restless, high voice for water god, wasn’t it? It had a whimper at the end of it. Why would a god visit her so exclusively? Did it need to know why? Was it her once-in-a-lifetime chance to elude death once? The vision was still blurred but the god kept at his ( Read more... )
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As far as this particular fic goes, screw canon. This was a great start to an excellent fic. And if it doesn't perfectly conform to canon, well, AUs are always fun to drabble in. Not to mention the fact that my inner grammar nerd is happy with how you wrote it (and unbeta'd! I'm impressed!). Love the characterizations.
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Thank you, thank you, thank you. I've only had a couple of people (close friends) view this and I haven't been sure on if it's good or not. One particular friend, a writer that stopped viewing most of my work a while ago, only grimaced and handed it back to me after she read it. I was all, "D:" and thought that it might've been bad. This proves to me that she's only jealous! *righteous zeal* I was actually thinking on working on this today when I saw your comment. Now I think I really will! *buurn*
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