Brigits_Flame December Week 3 Entry

[kithlyara]

This is my entry for the third week of the December contest in brigits_flame . Comments are the best Christmas gift ever!

As always, my mind interprets the prompts a bit wonky. My entry deals with abuse, so anyone worried about abuse triggers might not want to read it.

The theme for this week is: Truth

Comments

[betta329]

This is exquisite. Excellent mood. Excellent capture of this situation. good job!

[kithlyara]

Thank you! As usual with my wonky entries, I always wonder about how well they'll be received.

My brother became a paranoid schizophrenic after his near death years ago. He went unmedicated for a long time. The things I heard from him and my parents (who he lives with) during that time are what partially fueled this entry.

[pa1ndru1d]

Very well done. I liked the twist, didn't see it coming. Impressive.

[kithlyara]

Thank you!

[merthin]

Sweet! Very clever, very realistic. I really enjoyed it.

[triplescorpio]

This was a very chilling psychological thriller of a story!

[lee_terati]

I love this piece - the twist at the end is great.