Part 2 on my short story!

Sep 13, 2009 22:01

If any of you read the first part, here's Part 2! Will our two heroes find their treasure? Will they escape the castle without being seen? Will they escape at all? Tune in to find out! :D *bricked at lame attempt of writing an eye-catcher ( Read more... )

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rainawallis September 14 2009, 23:46:05 UTC
Heh.... all these "we" pronouns. I'm wondering who is "we." :D this reminds me of a short story I once wrote in high school that depended on similar anonymity and had a twist ending of sorts. :)

I really like the hiding place for the gemstone - a clever touch!

Jumping ahead to the conclusion now! :D

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