Comments | kitkatgrl16: Last Part! Short Story Conclusion!

kitkatgrl16

Last Part! Short Story Conclusion!

Sep 14, 2009 15:37

:3 I hope you guys are excited! XD *scared of nonconstructive criticism* This part has everything! (No, not the Arashi song...) Action! Danger! Friendship! Romance? No, not that, I can't write romance worth a...well, you know. ;) Haa~, I think I'll leave this part out of my assignment...Somehow, I don't like how it ends. :/ If anyone has any ( Read more... )

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rainawallis September 14 2009, 23:58:47 UTC

And now, my final commentary. :D ( ... )

kitkatgrl16 September 15 2009, 03:26:20 UTC

Not at all! Thanks SO much for the spelling error check. XD I'm usually a stickler for that kind of thing...

Basically, it was just an idea that popped in my head and I thought it would work for my creative writing class. :) I needed to write in a way that you wouldn't know who was speaking, but I might have taken that idea a bit too far...

I still very much appreciate your constructive criticism. :)