Fragile Tension

[kitschobrien]

         Your words are acidic, but your mouth is sickeningly sweet; a dangerous concoction I’ve become addicted to. Your kiss sucks my soul from my chest, and each time it is more reluctant to return, a little bit staying under your tongue. Saliva drips into my mouth like a tasteless poison that I knowingly swallow with the intention of dying in

Comments

[reicheruchan]

wow... this is so emotional...love it!

[kitschobrien]

Thanks. Glad you enjoyed.

[cathat77]

Yamapi!!

[noeon]

Whoa. *blinks and shakes head* Wow. Got really lost in that one. That as intense and awful and also gorgeous. !!!

[kitschobrien]

Thanks. I got a bit lost while writing it myself. XD

[cathat77]

This was so intense and raw.... I just loved it. I thought it was so sincere and thorough with both Harry's and Draco's emotions. :]

[kitschobrien]

Thanks a lot. I was hoping I could represent them both with the limitations of first person.

[kimuranakai]

I love the story!
The narration is so wonderful and intense, it got me a little bit confused at first, but then once I finished the whole story, I totally fell in love with ur style of writing.

[kitschobrien]

Thanks so much. It was sort of experimental, so I'm glad it was alright.

[lucianwolf]

I just died. Seriously.

Your word choices were decadent and rich. Real word crafting. Incredible.

[kitschobrien]

Thanks, I'm very flattered haha.