New Story! -- Beginning's End -- Chapter One

[kitsukikun]

Fanfic

Title: Beginning's End
Series: Naruto
Pairing: NaruSasuNaru
Author: Kit
Rating: Hard M
Genre: Romance (Grad Student AU)
Wordcount: 3644
Summary: His sun would rise and set in those blue eyes, but Uchiha Sasuke would always admire him secretly. His best friend was straight and madly in love with his soon-to-be fiancee. But a little

Comments

[plushiesexual]

Ooh, hot and interesting~♥ Please continue!

[kitsukikun]

Thanks for the review :) I'll keep going. Now the question is: to threesome or not to threesome ;)

[plushiesexual]

Lol, the more the merrier I guess~ xD

[wings_on_fire]

Very interesting. Looking forward to updates:))

[kitsukikun]

Thanks! And thanks for taking time to review. I'll do my best on updates. :)

[lug_ar]

Best SasuNaru fic I've read in quite some time! Hope you post the next chapter soon,can't wait for it <3
First I thought it would be Gaara in the club.... :D
And I don't mind the Sakura bashing ;p

[kitsukikun]

ooo, I didn't even think that people would mistake him for Gaara... :) That would have been good too, eh? I guess I'm trying to make all the sound kids into the kinky sex addicts. ;) Anyway, thanks for taking time to review. I'll start chapter 2 nowish :)

[mija711]

Oh wow, I really like this beginning, is sexy and has its little bit of angst and trouble a brewing sort of thingy, and I have no problem with Sakura bashing, I mean dont get me wrong I like here, shes really a good character now in the manga now thats shes matured but honestly she was soo annnoyingly obsessed with Sasuke in your youth and frankly she still is with that whole I have to stop Sasuke by myself thing she pulled when he tried to kill her, confesing her fake feelings to Naruto as if telling him she cared for him now and not Sasuke, so he could stop going after Sasuke was like some gift to Naruto, she would be Damn Lucky if he gave HER the time of day, seriously sometimes I think Sakura and Ino, and I am referring to her little crying jag when they found out they were going to send out orders to have him hunted and killed, drive me batty, Karin has more of a claim to Sasuke than those two, oh kay sorry bout that rant, God I am so lame, anyhow I gotta read more, I love that Sasuke had NO problem with his sexual needs and

[kitsukikun]

Wahoo! My first long review :) Thanks for taking the time. <3

I know, I do like Sakura now, but her and Ino's obsession with Sasuke is kinda weird at this point. I mean, childhood crushes don't continue for years after separation. It's not normal... and I need an antagonist, so... :)

I was afraid people would be squicked by kinky sex Sasuke. I'm glad to know you enjoy him.

Thanks again for taking the time to review. I really appreciate it.

[anonymous]

this is what written really well and the characters are developing great! i can see the beginning of some awesome romance happening here :)

[kitsukikun]

Thanks for the review! Chapter two is on the way :)