Beginning's End -- Chapter Three

[kitsukikun]

Title: Beginning's End
Series: Naruto
Pairing: NaruSasuNaru
Author: Kit
Rating: Hard M
Genre: Romance (Grad School AU)
Wordcount: 5105
Summary: Every new beginning comes from some other beginning's end. -- Semisonic. His sun would rise and set in those blue eyes, but Uchiha Sasuke would always admire him secretly. Can Naruto and Sasuke let go

Comments

[cynaga]

nicely written!

[kitsukikun]

Heya, thanks! :) I appreciate your input.

[anonymous]

ohmagawd this story is getting better and better~! i can't wait for the next chapter :) you're a great writer

[kitsukikun]

Hopefully the next chapter lives up to your expectations. :) Thanks for the review!

[plushiesexual]

Omg things are getting so good!! It's only a matter of time before Naruto realizes who the "girl" that Sasuke likes really is~ xD

[kitsukikun]

Hehe... well, Naruto can be a little slow in the head sometimes, but not tooo long :) Thanks for reviewing!!!

[mija711]

Oh man first of all, sorry for the late review, started reading it when it first posted but half way through got a bit sick and been bed ridden ever since lol, urrgh, anyhow omg I LOVE this...seriously, the beginning was hilarious the whole walking in on him masterbating thing, but the thing Sasuke said about how big he was and no wonder Sakura screams had me spittin my water out onto my key board, lol, I am soo pleased Sasuke is impressed, and hot damn I am GLAD Sasuke said all those things in the end to Naruto and Sakura, someone had to and if a best friend cant then who can? Serioulsly Is Naruto blond? Sakura was crying because Sasuke was sticking up for Karin and she was hurt and jealous, did Naruto not get this, is he not a bit pissed? He needs to be smacked upside the head, and hopefully this little scene helped and also helped him see that maybe he has some other sort of feelings for Sasuke, I just want Naruto to accidentally kiss and or sleep with Sasuke lmaoo when he sees Sasu in da club and possesivly stakes his claim on

[kitsukikun]

Hey, no problem. I was actually pretty late myself in getting around to responding to reviews. :) Also, sorry to hear you were ill, I hope you're doing better.

YAY! You think I'm funny... I try to be funny. I think I probably fail most of the time, but I've never been very good at maintaining tense moments. :) Naruto might be slightly blond, but we do see what we want in people, no? I've been on both sides of a love story like this. Ohmaigosh, relationships are so hard! :) A good smacking might do him well, however.

Thanks for taking the time for an extra-long review. You make me smile! :D

See you in chapter four!!!

[aquarian_days]

I'm glad about Sasuke's little outburst at the end of the chapter. He finally got a lot of stuff off his chest with Naruto, and even though part of his reason for starting the argument was because Sakura makes him angry, the fact remains that he got so heated under the collar because she was saying bad stuff about a friend of his, which is something that I can respect him for. Whatever other issues they have, Karin and Suigetsu are really decent to Sasuke (I'm pretty sure a large part of what Karin said to Naruto, particularly about Sasuke saying nice things about him, was her way of trying to be a bit of a matchmaker), so she didn't at all deserve to be talked about so disdainfully by Sakura

[kitsukikun]

AAAA!!! Sorry it took so long to reply to this! I always look forward to your thoughtful reviews, and I really appreciate the time you spend thinking about what you say.

You seem to have it right on track with what I'm trying to portray with Karin and Suigetsu. Kinky people are good people too! :) Needless to say, they won't be disappearing anytime soon.

Anyway, I'm uploading chapter four today, so it's not all for naught! (yay!)

Thanks again for your wonderful review. It's for reactions like these that I keep writing.

Cheers!