Comments | kitsune13_tam: happy birthday, stairstothe7th!!

kitsune13_tam

happy birthday, stairstothe7th!!

Jun 11, 2011 01:57

so, for once, I'm actually early instead of late about this but tomorrow's going to be crazy for me and I didn't want to miss wishing stairstothe7th a happy birthday!! So - happy birthday, my sweet and precious friend. I hope you like the gift. I thought you need more Zack.

Title: Awkward
Author/artist: TamLin
Setting: AU
Rating: T
Summary: a 200 word drabble ( Read more... )

cloti, prompt, zack, birthday, fic, tifa, cloud, au

Comments 11

darkslover June 11 2011, 11:38:32 UTC

And Zack keeps gawking as the curtain falls. XD

Hilarious ending. Very cute one-shot and it made both my CloTi and Fack shipper happy! =3

kitsune13_tam June 16 2011, 20:17:51 UTC

lol - glad you enjoyed it. Zack gave me the first line and the entire snippet just went from there. I suspect Cloud likes having a 'smoking' girlfriend :)

iskra_revoir June 12 2011, 04:56:48 UTC

LOL

Short, sweet and hyper-hilarious, specially because it´s so easy to picture it.... Zack may really need a brain-filter, but I guess he wouldn´t be as devastangly endearing with it on, would he? :insert Zack´s plushie flirty wink here:

Gotta love´em all!! :)

kitsune13_tam June 16 2011, 20:19:28 UTC

XD I had so much fun with this one. But it's hard to write Zack and not have fun for me. Yeah, darling Zack - he's not too good about keeping what he's thinking to himself. But we wouldn't have him any other way and Cloud deserved this.

fenikkusuken June 12 2011, 22:20:39 UTC

Bwahahaha! Oh, 'revenge' is indeed sweeeeeet!

Very nice, and I hope it brightened the birthday girl's day as much as it did mine!

kitsune13_tam June 16 2011, 20:20:23 UTC

Zack, gotta love Zack - but I do enjoy seeing Cloud come out on top. Especially since you know from this point on all he's going to have to do is smirk for Zack to know what he's thinking of.

momcalling June 13 2011, 01:25:59 UTC

Greetings to the Birthday Gal, and to the one who penned this delightfully clever zinger. God, I loves these characters! And I know they loved doing this! mc

kitsune13_tam June 16 2011, 20:21:15 UTC

Glad you enjoyed and yeah, gotta love them. Must be why we come back time and time again. They had a blast with this one and you know Cloud's going to be smirking about it for a long time to come.

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Re: THANKS kitsune13_tam June 16 2011, 20:23:07 UTC

heh - so very glad that you enjoyed this. I was wracking my brain trying to think of what to write and then Zack popped in. And Zack - well, he writes himself but especially when he starts off the story with a line like that. You, with your word smithing, I thought the slang might be enjoyed ;)

One can never have too much Zack in their life. Hope the birthday was good.