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avatar 20

Jun 16, 2011 16:14

Title: Avatar 20
Author/artist: TamLin
Setting: AU
Rating: T
Summary: what happens next? (I literally typed my keys off my keyboard for this. Well, the ';' key - but still...

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cloti, avatar, cloud, fic, au, tifa

Comments 8

skies_of_summer June 17 2011, 15:50:06 UTC

*squeal*

Awesomest chappie of all. Thank you Tam for brightening up my day :P

kitsune13_tam June 19 2011, 21:10:15 UTC

lol - glad I could help. It took forever to get to this chapter but I'm glad it worked so well. It was fun to write :D

iskra_revoir June 18 2011, 22:51:58 UTC

Wedge is an intern!!!
I know that that I should probably be squeaking about some of the other awesome moments in the chap, but hey! Interns are a rare breed. Gamer interns are a in-danger-of-extintion rare kind of breed, so we got to cheer for each other when we can!
Other than that, I really loved the final line! It´s real representative of Avatar-Cloud (or more like Steve, but I could never think of him other than Cloud!)
I think I lose a couple of chapters waaaay back, but I will be trying to read 'em before the month is out.
Many Plushie family hugs to you!!! ;)

kitsune13_tam June 19 2011, 21:12:07 UTC

pffft. Of course, Wedge is an intern. Someone's got to know what's going on ;) As for that closing line - had to be said, really. I never meant for it to become Steve/Cloud's catch phrase but it did and it was the only thing that would fit perfectly to assure everyone who it was coming back - lol. I'm glad it worked. And thank you I will take those plushie hugs and return hamster hugs in trade :D

sekiharatae June 21 2011, 21:29:39 UTC

I agree with the squeeing! I'm sorry I missed leaving feedback on the last chapter, I was just so O.O at the cliffie I couldn't get my thoughts in order. But this was a wonderful, wonderful chapter -- your pacing is excellent, and I could really empathize with Tifa's tension and sadness and hope.

Have I told you I love you lately? <3

kitsune13_tam June 23 2011, 16:08:53 UTC

I'm always happy to hear confessions of love XD And I'm glad you liked this chapter. I really did make an effort to slow myself down because I usually rush through 'finales' and have to go back and rewrite it slower and in more detail so I'm glad this one caught better. I didn't plan it but I was pretty pleased that this was Tifa's POV chapter's turn. It would have had to have been anyway considering but I was pleased that that's the way it just happened to work out too.'

Cloud's POV would have been kind of boring ;)

the_tower_room June 22 2011, 16:52:15 UTC

seeing this latest chapter made me feel like this:

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kitsune13_tam June 23 2011, 16:11:06 UTC

wow! gifs and smiley faces! I HAVE done well :D LOL I'm glad this chapter worked for you. After all the time I made everyone wait and all the build up I really tried to make it worth it. So if it's giant cookie cakes and bouncing smiley faces I'm going to take that as a group win! lol Now to write a mush and fluff filled final chapter and all will be well ;) Gotta have the fluff.