[FIC] Hold My Hands

[kitsune_hikaru]

Title: Hold My Hands

Author: kitsune_hikaru

Beta: ambrosse

Category: One-Shot

Pairing: Sakumoto

Rating: PG-13

Genre: Romance

Disclaimer: I don’t have that much money to buy them... In fact, owning people these days are no longer legal.

Warning: Un-betaed this time. I don’t get the time to beta this fic... Though I always prefer my Arashi fics to be perfect... T_________T

Comments

[sweetspicyhot]

Thanks for sharing this. I think this really works. Some fics just don't need a lot of dialogue. The way you describe things gives us enough information about the intentions and feelings of the characters. But if you feel that your fics need more dialogue, then they do, for yourself. I find it already impressive that you found the courage to change the pairings twice, not settling for something you felt wasn't right. I think that the reader really wants to hear from Jun, and that yearning builds throughout the fic, until finally at the end both Sho and the reader get exactly what they want. Well done. Thanks for this I love it. Hugs, Hearts, and flowers on the beach. Have not forgotten, just got the pictures up, will send you a link.:D:D:D

[kitsune_hikaru]

haha... the narration n characterization would be different with the ryouchi n juntoshi version of course, but i can hardly maximize the plot with the two pair, that's why i change it... i can express jun's change easier with sakumoto that's why~~ i know, i'm such a perfectionist, lol~ ^^

jun's last answer is definitely my intention for making him so quiet n hard to reach... n it's easier bcoz jun in real life really changed from those times when arashi was still new. n i want the reader to feel that even though he changed, there's part of him that never changed, n that is his love towards his bandmates. it's pretty much obvious how i made him believe every words from sho here, lol~~

n thank u so much for reading again, dear~
really appreciate it~
n really glad that u liked it~~ ^^
*hugs n flowers to u too*
*keeping those u gave me* :P

[whitelily8]

i really like the concept of this fic. how no matter what happens Jun would always come to sho for comfort even after when he wasn't the fanboy that's always following him around. sakumoto fics told in sho's pov are always my favorite. Thanks for sharing :)

[kitsune_hikaru]

thank u soo much for ur compliment~~ ^^
n yeah, i'm glad u can see what i tried to weave here~ ;)
aah, really?? *laughs*
i'm glad then... i hope i can write more about them in the future~~ ;)

PS: ur icon~!!!!!!!! ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥
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[rarachan_sho]

Uwaaaaa! I love this one the most <3 *_*
It does fit sakumoto xD esp the way you explain MatsuJun character. Maybe he's not the quiet one *is Oh-chan* but he's definitely the one who cares sooo much about the other members :) I think you should write a novel :P I'll definitely buy~ hehehe

Haha, I see that you're a fully Arashian now ^O^ Thank you very much for posting this, I almost forgot about this XD

[kitsune_hikaru]

yay~!! i'm glad u liked it~~ ^^
ikr~~ i dont think matsujun is that quiet as well, but i just wanted to assume he is quiet when he had problems in this fic... mainly bcoz i want to maximize the effect when he finally answers sho's question in the end...

a novel?? *laugh* well, i would write a novel as long as it consist the JE boys... ueda, eito or arashi would be okay~ lol~ or maybe kinki kids, v6 or tokio will do~ lmao~~ XD

lol~ yeah, i kinda addicted to arashi lately, thanks to u n aionin~ what a great combination~ lmao~~ XP
i have yet to get into yama pair... there's this one prompt about yama pair n i'm still pondering how i should write those two... lol~~ n wait, I HAVENT WRITE NINO, MY ICHIBAN~!!! *gets smacked*

huhu... btw, thank u so much for reading, dear~ ^^

[japayupki]

Thank you for adding me. One of the most beautiful, poignant Sakumoto ffs I have ever read. You perfectly captured the expectations and burdens placed on these boys, but most especially on Jun and Sho. I hope you write more Sakumoto :) arigatou!

[kitsune_hikaru]

You're welcome. And thank you for the generous comment. I'm glad you find it poignant enough, it's a great compliment! I always feel like each of them do have their own burden that people just didnt think about. And Arashi isnt any exception. Some people thought they walked through red carpet to success, I just want to express it was wrong, and there goes the fic. XD
Thank you so much for reading though. :)