[Multi-chap] Liminal : Chapter 4

[kitsune_hikaru]

Title: Liminal - Chapter 4
Author: kitsune_hikaru
Category: Multi chaptered
Pairing: PiN, past!TakkiRyo, friendship!RyoPi, KAT-TUN, JunDa, KoKame
Rating: PG-13
Genre: AU, fantasy, action, friendship, romance, angst
Disclaimer: Too bad owning people are no longer legal these days...
Summary: In the world where myths and sciences co-existed together, where people

Comments

[mrs_koki]

Okay I wasn't expecting Ueda to be a Liminal...nicely done. XD

I wonder if the others know and if so why they didn't kill him...oohhhh hurry up new chappie. *bounces somewhat impatiently*

thanks for the update XD

[kitsune_hikaru]

ooops~ sorry to surprise u~
^^

n well, considering uepi's missing, they might probably didnt know... i dont know if they will even get the chance to know, anyway~ ^^

thanks for reading too~
XD
owh, n i added a pic at the end of the post... i forgot to post it together just now...

[mrs_koki]

No, u can surprise me. I don't mind XD

I wonder if that's how he managed to lose his memory...when the dragon liminal entered his body. Hmm...can't wait to find out.

I saw that pic and that's as about as close to gold as you could get.

Ur welcome XD

[kitsune_hikaru]

uh uh... yamapi n ryo owe that explanation to ueda too~ ;)

i know right... it's so hard to find a gold color... i hope it fits right... ^^
*hugsss*

[lybrint]

So, Ueda really dangerous 2 RyoPi? *nervous* I hope nothing bad happen with this 2 friends ^^' What so important with this monogram? I think, I saw it somewhere *scratchmyhead*

Anyway, nice chap n thank U 4 updated =)

[kitsune_hikaru]

well, he might be dangerous... ryo n pi had to be careful, esp now that ueda regained his memory~
let's hope ryo n pi will be safe... ;)
the symbol that ryo got??
i took the symbol from sacred geometry, if that's what u mean... it's a well-used worldwide, i think... u can search for sacred geometry if u want... ;)
it might even give u a clue of my idea of this fic

thanks for reading too~
glad u liked it~ ;)

Spot!

[rabyuu]

i immediately check your journal for chapter four!
I didnt notice earlier that you responded to my comment in the last chapter.

Anyway, next chapter please!

Sorry, i really like the story,that's why!

I love Pi and Jin's phone conversation. Its heartbreaking too.

I thought that the way Ueda regain his memory is a lil bit rushed, but i know its needed to be written that way.
I thought it was Koki who sew the name in the hankerchief, but maybe Koki taught Junno how?!

Also i hope Ueda throw a fit, you know for lying to him, so Pi and Ryo would know how dangerous he really is.
But i hope he join them, you did say that they need a reptile Liminal, right?

Will we get a buzou!Ueda for the next chapters and onwards?!

YaY! Kuuya! /excited

ja ne~

Re: Spot!

[kitsune_hikaru]

the next chappie is like... 1/6 done?? lol~
be patient, i need to write it properly bcoz it's a plotted story... if i rush, i might ruin some parts or plots in the future~ :P

actually i really intend to make ueda remembered by the time he touched takki's pearl, n yes, it was meant to be fast... ^^
i made junno sew bcoz i intended to make a junda out of this. n yeah, i know koki was the one who can sew... maybe koki taught him, lol~ i didnt intend to write details about that anyway.

owh, ryo n pi will get their share, dont worry. they do need a reptile liminal, but things sometimes r out of their control. ^^

uh uh~ *claps* from this chappie onwards, it will be bouzu!Ueda~~ XD
yay~!! to kuuya too~~ but well, since he gained his memories, no more kuuya's personalities... -_-"

thanks for reading~
glad u liked it so much~ ♥♥♥

Re: Spot!

[rabyuu]

i will try, being patient!
That's why i hate reading multichap, multichaps that has no end or is still ongoing, coz i dont really like to keep guessing what will happen next.
I read really fast, i did try to read a 300 pages paperback book in one sitting, from 5pm to 2am. The book is Da Vinci's Code, i need to return it the next day, so i had to finish it.

Take your time in writing, ill wait as patiently as i can.

Eh, no more Kuuya?!
But i think you should let him out, just to annoy Ryo!

Buzou!Ueda is still a sexy!Ueda, ne?!

ja ne~

[snow_meow]

Oh shit!! Ueda has his memories back.
I wonder how much danger will that be for Ryo and Pi.

Will he start to attack them?

[kitsune_hikaru]

yup, ueda's memories r back... n ryopi need to face it now...
we'll see... there will be some problem though~
thanks for reading~ ;)

[romapi]

I already read it. this is great. XD

thanks for sharing.

[kitsune_hikaru]

thank u so much for reading too~
glad u liked it~
might update the next chappie by the end of the weekend~ ;)