[Multi-chap] Liminal : Chapter 5

[kitsune_hikaru]

Title: Liminal - Chapter 5
Author: kitsune_hikaru
Category: Multi chaptered
Pairing: PiN, past!TakkiRyo, friendship!RyoPi, KAT-TUN, JunDa, KoKame
Rating: PG-13
Genre: AU, fantasy, action, friendship, romance, angst
Disclaimer: I don't own... Bla bla bla... If I do own anyone, I'll let you know...
Summary: In the world where myths and sciences co-existed together, where

Comments

[romapi]

I know that they need the merman right? Is that uchi or subaru? or Yoko?

thanks for sharing

[kitsune_hikaru]

yup, they need the merman... let's see...
u'll know soon~ ;)
thanks for reading too~

[kissmegreen]

Awww, what an eventful and revealing chapter!

So that's how Takki died - and now we can fully understand Ryo's pain.

I love your descriptive scenes, everything was vivid, made me wanna watch it onscreen...

... and the pace is good, like people are finding out things fast - it keeps the plot rolling!

Thanks for sharing hun -

*btw, was it Takki's death you had warned about?*

[kitsune_hikaru]

Aww, thank you... yeah, my fic is a bit fast paced, but i need to make it that way bcoz there is so much to reveal in the series... ^^

yeah, that's how takki died... that's why ryo kept blaming himself... but it was the starting point when they embark to their journey, n the symbol will be a big clue.
i hate myself for putting ryo, one of my ichiban in so much pain... but i cant help it... i should reward him someday... ;_______;

thanks for ur compliment... i was afraid my narration doesnt sound real enough, so ur comment really made me feel relieved~ ;)

thanks for reading too~
*psst, whispers* maybe, maybe not~ :P
i'm such a tease~ :P

[mrs_koki]

Love the chappie.

Your narration sounds just fine.

Let's see, Ryo is phoenix, Pi is...I forgot. Ueda is a dragon. What connection could these three have with each other, I wonder.

Merman's are capable of human speech in some cases.

Thanks for sharing.

XD

[kitsune_hikaru]

thanks~ lol~ ^^
i havent revealed what Pi is yet, so we only know ryo n ueda so far~ ;)

mermen r capable yes, but in this story, all liminals regarding types cant speak if they lost control of themselves. n all liminals that has manners of control over their liminal form can speak, no matter what type they r~ :D

thanks for reading too~~ ♥♥♥

[mrs_koki]

I can't wait to find out what Pi is XD.

I wonder what the merman is trying to tell them...hmm.

*waits for next chappie*

You're welcome XD

[lybrint]

Wow, this is so fascinating!!! Phoenix really make me feel excitement ^_^

Don't U worry, Ryo sadness n suffering are really enjoy 2 watch *smirk* That couldn't be help *hide* XD That's one of side Ryo I'm dying 2 look at it *grin*

U sure know about those liminal ne ^^ U really a genius babe ^_~ Love it!

Awesome chap n thank U 4 updated =)

[kitsune_hikaru]

thank u~ phoenix is a very unique creature, so does dragon. that's why i used them. it helps the plot a lot...
btw, have u searched the sacred geometry i told u?? did u get the faintest clue as to how i got the idea of this fic? *wink*

*grins* well... i kinda feel bad a bit though... i'll make up for ryo later, since i tortured him a lot here... n come to think of it, my previous RyoJin was an angst too...

lol~ i just manipulate the facts about those mythical creatures... n develop a story out of them~ i promise i'll reveal where i got the idea from someday, later after almost most of the plot revealed.

thanks for reading too~ ♥♥♥
glad u liked it~ ;)

[lybrint]

Oh, about the sacred geometry...yeah I search it...n it really give me a headache XD Nice try my friend XD

I found it here:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Flower_of_Life
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Metatron%27s_Cube

Still, I got headache about it XD

[kitsune_hikaru]

lol~ it is complicated yes... but sacred geometry is a list of them...
try this one:
http://theartofqi.net/sacred-geometry/sacred-geometry/

it's easier...
^^