Comments | kitsune_kitana: SPN - Under the Wartime (RPS, Jared/Jensen, NC-17)

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SPN - Under the Wartime (RPS, Jared/Jensen, NC-17)

Nov 01, 2009 22:47

Title: Under the Wartime
Author: kitsune_kitana
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Jared/Jensen
Warnings: RPS, whore!fic, major consent issues, cbt, bdsm, d/s, angst
Word Count: 3432
Summary: Jensen is trade and Jared not a nice trick.

Written for blindfold_spn. Title taken from a line in Ginsberg's "Howl". I have some tentative ideas to make this into a series (or, ( Read more... )

jared/jensen, fic, rps, spn

Comments 39

griva_x November 2 2009, 14:03:18 UTC

Ack. It was good in a twisted way. But I do want Jared to make Jensen okay in the end of the next part. ;)

kitsune_kitana November 4 2009, 05:01:17 UTC

Glad you liked it!

autumnverse November 2 2009, 16:05:24 UTC

So... It turns out that even if you write dark fiction yourself, you can still get embarrassed admitting in a comment that you thought that was hot, lol.

*takes deep breath*

Ithoughtthatwasreallyreallyhotslightlydisturbingyesbutreallyfuckinghotandwowamazinglywellwrittenandhot.

There ;)

Very well done indeed, thanks so much for sharing :D

kitsune_kitana November 4 2009, 05:01:51 UTC

Haha, thanks for the confession! I'm glad you enjoyed it~

sgfansean November 2 2009, 18:52:43 UTC

Oh, wow. Holy fucking shit! I'm sitting here at work eating my lunch while reading this and I nearly choked a few times.

This was soooooo good and I haven't seen too many stories where Jared is the Dom in the scenario. Very interesting. And you just know by his size that he could really wield a whip. Or a flogger. Or a belt. Or...

Oh.My.God

HIS HANDS!!!!

*thunk*

I'm sending this to my friend. I think that she'll like it as much as I did. We're both kinda sick like that.

And I just have to say that a little bit of CBT never hurt anyone.

Now mind you, *I* don't have the CB part of that equation. But I do like consensual sexual torture of most kinds. So...

*wicked grin*

kitsune_kitana November 4 2009, 05:02:24 UTC

Thanks--you are mighty brave to be reading these things at work!

mre_quecky November 4 2009, 04:17:42 UTC

Oh wow, loved it! Jensen is so desperate and hurt, looved!

kitsune_kitana November 4 2009, 05:02:52 UTC

I appreciate the feedback! Thanks for reading!

supernatangel67 November 6 2009, 03:54:03 UTC

My sadistic side is very, very happy & satisfied for now!!!!! Loved it!!!

kitsune_kitana November 11 2009, 07:12:53 UTC

Thanks!