100 Ben/Gwen Fic Challenge: #014 Green and #005 Outsides

[kitsunexmaxwell]

As promised... my second dumping of stories. I'm really excited that I did get some writing done, especially with my favorite cousin couple ((don't tell Neji and Hinata)). I did have three but I really don't like one turned out so I'm sharing on two.

I guess this first one is going to be in Gwen's perspective.

Comments

[t_bluesummers]

Hehehe.... smut

I liked both of these drabbles. I think you got what you needed to across. I know you were going for smut with the second one and you are getting close. Maybe next time ^_-

[kitsunexmaxwell]

Close... but not close enough. Damn. I guess smut is going to be more doing and touching bodies instead of just thinking. And you're right... maybe it will be next time. What smuttiness can come with the term "circle" XD

[storymasterq]

Aww, cute :)
As for the smut, heh, your hubby's right :D But you are getting there. At least it appears that you'll land on the small island of tasteful smut on the ocean planet of PWP water.

Keep it up!

Cheers,
SQ

[kitsunexmaxwell]

*grinz* The island for tasteful smut is small?? Damn... that sounds like the target is going to be very hard to hit.

... how big do you think the tasteless island is? XD

Thank you for the compliments I will try to keep up what I have and attempt more higher ratings... eventually.

[storymasterq]

Well, as I said, the planet of smut is an ocean plant, with 98% water and 2% land. Now, that land is the tasteful bit, while the water is the tasteless bit.

Hope ya got good aim :D And I didn't mean AOL's IM XD

Cheers,
SQ

P.S.: BNGSMUT4EVR!