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kitsunexmaxwell

Tasteless Smut

Feb 09, 2007 21:38

Title: Untitled
Fandom: Xiaolin Showdown
Characters: Jack/Wuya
Word Count: 598
Rating: MA
Summary: Jack blames Wuya for being more fucked up now than ever before, it could be because she "trained" him for herself.
Author's Notes: This will probably never find it's way on fanfiction.net. I'm feeling irritable and frustrated, and felt like ( Read more... )

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Comments 1

t_bluesummers February 10 2007, 06:59:17 UTC

So you finally have started to write smut. You have a good start. This is a plausible idea and is pretty neat. I like the idea that it happens long after the show ends. I also like the personality you give to Jack that has evolved from what you see in the show. I'd say finish this if you feel comfortable with it, you have a good start.