Inception fic: Justement, Je Regrette Les Zombies (8/14)

[kittie_gurl57]

Title: Justement, Je Regrette Les Zombies (8/14)
Fandom/Pairing: Inception, Arthur/Eames, Ariadne/Fischer
Overall Rating: PG-13
Overall Warnings: Language, violence, character un-death
Wordcount: 5,720
Notes: Okay, I know it's up late, but I fell asleep. ;) So I left you with a horrible cliffhanger...well, here's the next chapter. I can't thank towel_master

Comments

[fae_boleyn]

Oh, Eames...

Also, Arthur is a cunning bastard even when he's infected. I wish I wasn't impressed.

[kittie_gurl57]

I know, right? Poor honey.

Arthur's a smart cookie. He's gonna got eat some flesh, now, though. he'll be right back. ;)

[red_rahl]

OH GAWD ARTTTHHHUUURRR!!!!! I love the building tension (after the complete and utter freefall of the previous chapter) and how Ariadne is so in character (with her pushing for more information). I love how strong she is and her call with her boyfriend was adorable.

I love all the backstory with Arthur as pointman and the gorgeous stories of his and Eames's luck charms. So very good and a wonderful detail seamlessly incorporated into this 'verse. Just, poor Eames's desperation really gets to me, as well as poor Cobb's. DDDD: I loved that Cobb is trying to reassure Eames (maybe telling him everything that was told to him when Mal turned).

I love the feel of this world you've created, how you really captured the horror and devastation and yet, how you've given us all that sliver of hope that there could be a cure, which is a wonderfully unique twist on the zombie storyline. *HOPES SO HARD

[kittie_gurl57]

Oh, bb, you're wonderful. I'm so happy you like this so much! In character was my biggest goal, so I'm glad you think I pegged them. ;)

I loved coming up with those stories. And I love details. I do. So much. I'm also very happy that you think the world feels real. That is so encouraging. :)

Mal. I love Mal.

[red_rahl]

I am SO digging your stuff!!! I am endlessly fascinated with zombie stories but it's more for the social/societal/human interactions and developments so this story is very, very awesome for me! A bit like WWZ (which is very high praise, in my mind). ^___^ And YES! I love your characters! They feel very authentic while remaining true to their development in this 'verse.

AND MAL IS F-ING CREEPY! GAWD!!! And I just KNOW zombie!Arthur is GOING TO FREAK ME THE HELL OUT OH GAWD OH GAWD OH GAWD OH GAWD...

*whimpers and hides under the mountain of pillows and blankets* Gawd, I hope I can sleep tonight. XD

[kittie_gurl57]

Thanks. You know, I've never read WWZ...

Sorry, I didn't mean to frighten you. I hope you can sleep tonight!

[kittie_gurl57]

Thank you so much, darling!

[towel_master]

Wheeee! It's so good! I love what you did with my suggestions, especially in the car scene and with Fischer. Really, much better. And much more compelling! I mean, I've read this chapter, what, five times by now? But I still got all excited reading it again!

Mission accomplished, meine Schwester! :D

[kittie_gurl57]

Aww, thanks. And yeh, I'd be nowhere without you. :)

[ebilgatoloco]

Man....Mal was creepy! I got chills....-shudders-

[kittie_gurl57]

Mal. I love Mal. :)